Lenna has me so intrigued, can't wait to see what you do with her character!
The last part was such a power move. Love that for Jac!
PFFFT that managed to make me laugh.
His first thought: Is Nani okay? And when he looked down to see her lying safely across his lap, his second thought was: How does my hair look?
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Again your descriptions are beautiful! Love how this fight is described, it's so visual.
Tobei couldn't help but grin as they danced around the clearing making some of the most beautiful, violent music he'd ever heard. He could see it in her, too. That electricity, the way she came alive. The way that, all the time they traded blows, dodged and blocked and thrust, their gaze was never broken. And if he wasn't mistaken, that snarl that curled her lip was half smile now.
Her Broken Magic
Fantasy · likegemstone15
Jac is terrifying when she's angry and I love it!
I find it really interesting and love the fact that Belle is super convincing, but not manipulative. She just has a lot of heart and can connect to people and creatures alike.
Then why do you keep going out and reminding the queen you exist? The thought came in her voice, accompanied by a mental image of those eyes blinking up at him.
Her Broken Magic
Fantasy · likegemstone15
Such beautiful descriptions, and it does sound oddly cozy. I love how Belle can make the best of things, it's really admirable of her.
Poor Daivad has no idea what's coming for him lol.
I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THE NEXT PART! This has me hooked!
This has me so intrigued!
Her Broken Magic
Fantasy · likegemstone15