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Good so far. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

It's rushed but the grammar is ok. Probably got bombarded by stones and tried to keep pace by rushing the plot. I don't personally recommend this fic as it feels 'off' to read to state simply. Quantity sacrificing quality.

A lot of cuck jokes and not references but otherwise a decent read nothing great but above the other slop on this site. Read for fun not for seriousness.

Very nearly perfect. The writing characters and others are in line and feel nice. Fine articulated and describes things in a nice light. Slight comedy that isn't forced or annoying.

Practice English or get this translated. ,................................................................................................

It's worth reading. Not much to say interesting concept other than that the story is a bit oddly paced and placed. Should be good though. I recommend it otherwise. 7.5/10

Worth a read but not my cup of tea. Feels kind of forced and I dislike the sudden shift from a Harry Potter fic to suddenly there's cultivator stuff. The early mention of meridians and stuff I took as just a passing reference but I don't want to stick around to see cultivator harem spam.

So far it's really well thought out and the decisions made do make sense to their ends. The MC has a fairly human outlook and makes sense in his own rites and rituals. His design is also epic sounding. The world state hasn't changed too much so far we still have the side arcs to go into and a lot of the subplot is yet to be touched.

Their common chests that are only worth gd and occasionally mundane things. Like a pocket watch or things if that nature.

I hope to see this updated often. It gives details and background relevant to coming characters and touches if character insight from different perspectives. It's not fast but slow. But I feel like it slowly snowballs. I look forward to reading more of this hopefully.

The grammar is good, the background story is good, the characters so far are good. There's some clear bias in the story but we're human after all. I have no real complaints aside from there not being more here to read. Keep it up. For the long part: there's not enough story to do an in depth review but over all I like the progress and the MCs reactions aren't over the top but fit in with the narrative of his time and placement in the story. That's all for now.