Author of Re:Servant. I began writing as a way to create a world I love. Please give me any criticism, thank you.
2023-02-04 Joined Global
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Fantasy · CosmicQuill
There’s cases in the world where people are easy to win over when they’re given something they lack (like love). Fang is kinda like this, where he’s won over by Salika because she didn’t feel disgusted by him, but also because she gave him a new opportunity to restart.
"I'll be under your care starting today, Salika," Fang proclaimed.
Fantasy · fwjchim
I noticed this too in my writing but I was unsure on how to fix it. I’l definitely go back and edit with your advice.
Fang stood up in his cage and grabbed the bars, gripping them intensely as if trying to rip them out. "You know nothing about me, fatass-"
Fantasy · fwjchim
Salika definitely has her own reasons for making Fang her servant but I plan on revealing it later when the time is right for the both of them.
ch 0 4 I Give In, Your Words Ease Me
Fantasy · fwjchim
When I was little my parents used to make me eat medicine that taste like sh** so this is where I got the idea from lol
He looked at the brown pouch again. "The medicine doesn't look like it's stored properly either... Did you at the very least make sure a different drug wasn't swapped in? It could be dangerous."
Fantasy · fwjchim
Already banger intro
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Fantasy · acebellrain
Jesus Christ 🤯
“Where hungrt was torture and thirst was a slayer” pretty fire if you ask me 😎🔥
However, there was a dreadful day for him. A day he never calculates or meets up with. Prisoned for eighty days in an underground dungeon where hunger was torture and thirst was a slayer, this Emperor didn't fall.
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
I’m not too familiar with this genre so I can’t really give a fair critique. What I can say though is that it’s definitely interesting in a good way. There were some punctuation problems but it was still readable. Continue writing!!!
Contract Marriage: In love with my boss
Urban · Grace_Harley1