shiny_rayz

shiny_rayz

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2023-02-04 Joined Global
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shiny_rayz
1 days ago
Posted

so the story is good but it could have been better if the writing was better not that it's bad but it's to amateurish,and everything just seems to be to convenient,i really like the novel but the writing need improvement, apart from that all is good 😊

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
4 months ago
Replied to DollyRoma

sus

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
4 months ago
Replied to DollyRoma

😂😂😂

Then his eyes dropped to the soap sitting on the tile shelf.

Guide To Surviving Prison Is Getting Screwed By General Lily! [BL]

Guide To Surviving Prison Is Getting Screwed By General Lily! [BL]

LGBT+ · Pop_Corn11

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
4 months ago
Replied to Mahee_Lalapesting

yah😔

I was a person who was not the man in the picture. I would never be him. There was no photograph of me in a wallet.

[BL] Bound to My Enemy: The Billionaire Who Took My Girl

[BL] Bound to My Enemy: The Billionaire Who Took My Girl

LGBT+ · DaoistIQ2cDu

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
4 months ago
Commented

honestly sometimes i get mad at how weak Noah is😩,oh I'm not talking about this situation though i mean in general

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
4 months ago
Commented

author hope Ur feeling better now 😊

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
4 months ago
Replied to DaoistIQ2cDu

mehn😭😭😭,my poor baby 😭😭

They've been there since before I even had a name for the feeling of the world being too loud and too bright. They get louder when things break. They were getting louder now, screaming for my attention.

[BL] Bound to My Enemy: The Billionaire Who Took My Girl

[BL] Bound to My Enemy: The Billionaire Who Took My Girl

LGBT+ · DaoistIQ2cDu

shiny_rayz
shiny_rayz
5 months ago
Commented

I thought you weren't updating anymore it's good that you continued😭