Webnovel Author: MukomaTJ - Fanfic Collection

Lol, I thought it was clear when I didn't see the harem tag but by chapter 4, my Spidey sense was tingling 😂 Thanks for the heads up and thoughtful review!

This is one rework from being pretty good. I know that may change the author's intent, but as it is, it just has good bones. Writing Quality: technical issues plague it, but it is more legible than an MTL. Updating Stability: Seemed to have a good cadence until it stopped. Story Development: a little all over the place. Definitely one of the areas that would benefit from a rework. Character Design: MC is a bit reckless World background: Kishimoto does the heavy lifting here, which is understandable for a fic.

Unfortunately, this reads like an MTL. It makes it difficult to follow the story or fully grasp the concept behind it. Perhaps with a serious round of editing, it can show it's true potential

Severe lack of punctuation makes this irritating to read/listen to at times. The status screens are also a peeve of mine, sometimes feeling like they're half the content. It's not for me, but I can get how that's the whole point for others. Otherwise it's an interesting idea for an au fic. The concept has legs and I can only hope it gets a rework in future. It would elevate the work so much.

I guess this must be a Chinese novel translation, given the tropes and randomly Chinese names. Still, as far as MTLs go, enough context makes it through for those familiar with Naruto to fill in the blanks. Some manual intervention may have been made or a better translator was used. As far as the storyline goes, it's okay. The main Idea is interesting and It leans towards the comedic side of things. It definitely depends on head canon interpretations of characters and their motivations and adds cultivation novel mechanics. If that will Agravate you, just go ahead and skip it. Otherwise, if you can dedicate a few extra brain cells to smooth out the weirdness, it's an ok read. It would be infinitely better if the translator also dedicated a little time a day to run Find and Replace on each chapter to fix the obvious translation issues.

Alrighty! No much to say here. This is a face slapping, world conquering cultivation novel in Naruto cosplay. If you are into that, this is the right place for you. Translation Quality is a big letdown. It reads like an MTL that had one rough editing pass. It would benefit massively from a human editor familiar with Naruto, and then maybe an AI pass to smooth grammar over

Abhorrent MC, but I guess it fits with the story the author wants to tell. Bonus points for the ultra rare use of Psyren. A great shonen manga that ended up near forgotten.