Webnovel Author: Emica_Dolion

1yr

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Prodigious Trinkerer, Nice

Zayne stood on the rooftop of his skyscraper home, gazing out at the sprawling city below. It was a city of towering skyscrapers that reached for the heavens, casting long shadows over the bustling streets. Zayne was a teenager with unruly dark hair and an insatiable curiosity for technology. He was known among his peers as a prodigious tinkerer, spending hours in his makeshift workshop on the rooftop, building and modifying gadgets with his ingenious mind.

Whisper The Shadow Legion series #1

Sci-fi · Salties_Gaming

Emica_Dolion

1yr

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Normally don't care for romance , also not my type of story but i think it well written. And switch over between characters are quiet smooth. The werewolf concept for noobies then being able to learn and control their powers. I like how the wolves can share energy when their in there group, and having their own language for their group. I'm only on chapter 12 but i excited to read more!Keep up the good work Sita!

Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

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Goddess how cutie wish to be mate free. !Smack Sylvia with a double whammy, "How about two!"

Defying a Goddess...that was what I would be doing. The Moon Goddess wasn't exactly known for being forgiving either. Her entire species of favorite creatures went through pain just for denying her in normal circumstances. What would happen if a multiple mated rejection took place? A single rejection was known to cause enough pain for someone to faint or fall ill for a while just to recover from the recoil it had on their body and energy. I shrugged my shoulders, not having a better answer for her. "I don't know, honestly I hadn't thought of that." In all this time I had hoped the Goddess would go easy on me with my special situation and grant me this silent wish to never find my mate. It seems she'd done the opposite and given me multiple.

Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

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Sylvia be like:

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Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

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I like the Name indicated in the chapter for for the switch of perspectives!

Sinlan:

Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

Commented

Lol

"This food tastes like crap." Daniel said as he scarfed down the double cheeseburger. He hadn't been away from base often and was used to the fresh food we ate at home.

Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

Commented

Love the scene where he sees his mate

ch 0 2 The Message

Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

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Im Jelly i have a black sheet set but Black oak dressers

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Shadow Moon

Fantasy · KLucus

Emica_Dolion

1yr

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I think it was well described, the flow was nice and I liked the explanation of the den. I like how she can use one of her wolves to translate. The shared energy , and their own languages for their own pack is very neat idea!

ch 0 1 Game of Catch