GwenKrystal

2mth

Commented

ooo

ch 44 Quick Marriage

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GwenKrystal

2mth

Commented

I need a William in my life .William Shakespeare [img=recommend]

ch 43 I understand you

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GwenKrystal

2mth

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i absolute love how the characters r actually crafted for the story and not just to mention once and leave

ch 42 Clothes and lunch

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GwenKrystal

6mth

Posted

Changing review bcz after reading the latest chapter i came to conclude that a lot is changed and the author is doing a good job. congrats for contract btw. Also the fact that u increased two chapters before we reach from where we left is so nice.

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GwenKrystal

6mth

Commented

things changed but I like it also author iIlike their interactions but I miss Louis

ch 25 Grave of a cheater

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GwenKrystal

6mth

Commented

ya this shows that the author is a good one bcz she didn't just write I . English and said that they were talking in french. this is interesting to see in a book.

ch 24 Orphanage

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GwenKrystal

7mth

Commented

next chapter is gonna be sad ik

ch 22 Helping him out

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GwenKrystal

7mth

Commented

hey this is new change. also I would want Louis to be my friend like pls give me that business .

ch 21 Louis's diary

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GwenKrystal

10mth

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this book is now republished under the name of Reborn the mafia queen and her two lovers

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GwenKrystal

10mth

Commented

Author really just said"Plottwist"

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GwenKrystal

10mth

Posted

the writing is simple very simple and ez to understand.I do like how the author gave her 10 chapters with louis before turning to William.The characters also have some personality.Ok but updates needs to be frequent.Sometimes they don't post a chapter a day(i know writing could be hard)and the world is confusing bcz the reincarnations i have read don't have the future thingy so yeah but if something new happens then i'll change this review of mine