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FamiliarHydr
male LV 3I write what I want to read, because no one else will write it for me. Doesn't guarantee quality, but I do what I can. I post stories here, and Fatal Revelations on Royal Road.
2023-02-13 Joined PhilippinesBadges 5
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OH MAN! I REALLY DID LEAVE MY OUTLINE IN THERE! SORRY SORRY! LOL, I SHOULD REALLY DOUBLE CHECK HUH?
ch 44 Once The Smoke Clears
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Atlas was not sentenced to Tartarus actually, that's the other titans and Kronos (it's different here bc you know). He was condemned to forever hold the sky. It's one of the more famous tales in greek mythology.
ch 35 A Tale To Be Told
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
As much as that excuse sounds interesting, that was just my mistake LOL. It's changed. Sorry! And thanks for pointing it out!
ch 35 A Tale To Be Told
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
As of now, the Hydra was never the only one who holds the domain of time, even if Chronos didn't exist, other time gods would just make it make less sense. So the 'web of divinity' idea is what I made to rationalize the multiple existences that all share the same domain.
You did not think Time itself had willingly given up itself for the sole reason of victory and defeat did you? No, no, no... Time had demanded responsibility, and now, it was their outmost duty to do so.
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
I suppose it's my mistake I forgot to expound on this. Basically since there are multiple pantheons, there are also multiple versions of the concepts that make up reality. These versions however, are one and the same, they are connected, like a giant web of divinity. They are all Time, yet they all manifest differently according to the divinity of the God in question. Chronos, is the primordial of time and Kronos is the god of time in my novel. However he is not introduced yet, that time will come later. Things are probably confusing, but that's for all things concerning mythology really, im just trying to rationalize it.
You did not think Time itself had willingly given up itself for the sole reason of victory and defeat did you? No, no, no... Time had demanded responsibility, and now, it was their outmost duty to do so.
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
I think it's gone now though, i edited the chapter and for me it's gone.
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Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Ah that... for me it was some buggy Html code, I think it bugged. I didn't write it on purpose btw, sorry if it broke your immersion.
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Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
In my editing, I'm afraid some paragraph comments might have disappeared.. sorry about that..
ch 28 Regaling The Tales I
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Uhhh, so I checked back on this chapter and found a very concerning glitch happening. It seems like traces of Html(?) just keep popping up between the texts, specifically the last paragraphs. Any ideas on how to fix this? I tried changing it, but it just keeps appearing... for me anyway, i dont know about you guys.
ch 28 Regaling The Tales I
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
If you're a little confused, then you're probably thinking the Hydra did a loop de loop, which they didn't. To expound on this, they basically rolled sideways with their wings outstretched. Since the Thunderbirds were so close, all of them got knocked out of the sky. Hope this clears things a little more!
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Thats... pretty close yeah. Minus the claws and the oversized wingspan then yes, thats exactly what they look like.
" B O O M ! " And with a mighty flap that broke the sound barrier, the Hydra took to the skies for the first time straight from below the sea! The wings had so much drag that it wreaked havoc among the waves, pacifying it's rage, and redirecting it with a mighty gale with each flap.
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
You might recognize the stunt they did. It's a reference to Godzilla KOTM where Rodan does the same barrel roll.
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FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Tis' not long, dear reader! The hydra will surely be glorified amidst the spotlight in the coming chapters! Though the chapters might take a little longer, since I'm taking the time to plan things out before writing. Thanks for reading!
ch 27 No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Thanks! It's just that I know from personal experience that stuff like this can be very grating. And the entire reason I started writing was because I wanted to read and deliver stories that don't have these irritating qualities that I personally didn't like. So please guys, don't be afraid to point out some stuff you personally find boring or irritating, so I can improve the story as much as possible!
ch 26 The Flame Will Burn Forevermore
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
I am glad you enjoy the novel! Hope you weren't bothered by the rampant loss of the MC pov for awhile though.
ch 15 Titanomachy III
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
There will be no romance nor a harem. This is a strictly nonhuman, monster MC. Thanks for the comment!
ch 12 Beginning Of The End
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Its actually a bit of both, destruction and creation are just the vessels. Order is the outcome that is achieved or restored. They are not exclusively destruction and creation, just that they achieve order through 'tipping the scales' back in place either with force, or healing. Hope that clears it up a bit.
ch 0 3 Life Officially Begins!
FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr
Obligatory shameless Author Review! As stated before this novel is essentially an extended train of thought of what would happen if the implications of an omnipotent being/creator were to be directly involved with the story instead of a plot device to move the MC to the new world. I have spent a lot of time fleshing out the world of Asphodel, and I sincerely hope you guys find it interesting. Remember to support the novel if you like it. Power stones, comments, reviews especially, anything is appreciated! See ya!
Fatal Revelation: A Righteous Crusade In Asphodel
Fantasy · FamiliarHydr