Great chapter. Glad to see character development.
ch 264 A Song Of Fire and Ice [Part 2]
Fantasy · Elyon
Looks like some great things are ahead. Just saw one typo. You have invention . I think you’re looking for demon invasion
ch 247 Chapter 247. Fenrir's Request and Warning
Fantasy · kuru_patel
You have a couple paragraphs that are repeating themselves. Keep up the good work
ch 227 Chapter 227. Young Days
Fantasy · kuru_patel
Hey great chapter. Really enjoying the development of the story. Just wanted to let you know that you repeated the same paragraph twice. Keep up the good work [img=update]
ch 226 Chapter 226. Waffle's Way of Dealing With Problems
Fantasy · kuru_patel
Hopping to get a lily chapter back home. We enjoy seeing her pov when she tells her parents
ch 214 Which One Of Them Would Become His Girlfriend?
Fantasy · Elyon
Really good chapter.
ch 215 Don’t Be Like Me, Ethan. Live The Dream
Fantasy · Elyon
Appreciate you adding more chapters
ch 213 Emma’s Payback
Fantasy · Elyon
Keep on the good job
ch 204 Stupidity Is Infectious
Fantasy · Elyon
Great chapter
ch 202 I’m Sorry If I Hurt You
Fantasy · Elyon
Really good glad chapters [img=update]
ch 200 Seeing You Again Makes My Skin Crawl
Fantasy · Elyon
Can’t wait for the chapters
ch 196 The Beginning Of A Legend
Fantasy · Elyon
Excellent chapter . Enjoyed that trick play
ch 194 The God Of Sea And Storm [Part 3]
Fantasy · Elyon
This was such a great chapter
ch 192 The God Of Sea And Storm [Part 1]
Fantasy · Elyon
Such a great chapter . Keep up the good work.
ch 190 My Last Kiss
Fantasy · Elyon
This book keeps getting better every chapter. I hope youll drop more than 2 chapters eventually . Keep up the good work
ch 178 Make Haste, And Prepare For War
Fantasy · Elyon
Keeps getting more interesting
ch 176 Puppets Tied Up On A String
Fantasy · Elyon
Really good chapter
ch 174 Only Path To Survival
Fantasy · Elyon
Another great chapter .
ch 172 A Broken Soul
Fantasy · Elyon
Good chapter , but you have a repeat paragraph nearby the top
ch 272 Chapter 272. A Troubled Encounters, Velvet's Disappearances
Cheat Awakening ( Rewritten )
Fantasy · kuru_patel