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Stop using =========, they are so annoying in audio mode

ch 22 Hellish Training

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

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I don’t understand the stupidity of MC way of working with girls. As an apology he spends 20k credits!!! Author calls them with descriptions rather than using names. Comedy is barely present. There are good characters but they were barely used in story building. Got bored barely into 100 chapters. It’s more of r13 than r18. More of drama than fantasy genere.

Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular

Fantasy · Elyon

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Left for future

"That thing is left in future. But, I am curious about character and personality." Yogesh said.

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Fantasy · Death_Simulation

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Good job so far, keep it rolling. Also check on the tenses, not nitpicking but it’s good to have clear lines ;)

ch 28 Chapter 28- Decreasing Skills

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Fantasy · Death_Simulation

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Good start, keep it going. You picked a good line and hope you would continue without dropping. I would highly appreciate if you don’t get into the whole chapters of harem fillers. Keep rocking.

Mind Demon's Path of Domination

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