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Of course he has to be 3, I know you're a pred. You love to molest children. I hate you

Using his magic, he starts to control his toothbrush, using half of his focus to brush his own teeth while his other focus was on the door to immediately stop when someone entered. Thankfully, he was the only 3-year-old in the orphanage, and the older members of the orphanage always wake up way after he finishes his routine.

Harry Potter: The Name's Constantine...

Harry Potter: The Name's Constantine...

Book&Literature · Damaine_N

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AYO!!!!

"Harder, old man!" Satoru sneered, throwing the other party backwards like a bowling ball.

Naruto: Gojo Satoru Is The Strongest

Naruto: Gojo Satoru Is The Strongest

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Your story was terribly written here, you can't use the same idea and change it only a paragraph after. You stated their job is in the next 3 months but earlier you said 6? I don't understand how you let this slip through while edits were made. I'm disappointed in your work, it isn't an enjoyable read. أيها الحقير السخيف أصلح كتابتك أيها الشاذ اللعين - Ricky Y

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One of them was visibly old and had wrinkles coupled with some scares on his face, showing he'd been an Auror for a long time. His hair was mostly grey now, but it used to be black. His eyes, even if weary, held a sharp look of wisdom and experience, and he moved with confidence, like someone who'd seen it all. The young Auror, on the other hand, was full of energy. He wore a neat, brightly coloured robe and had messy dark hair. He seemed eager, determined — and a bit scared — but that was understandable seeing the nature of their job for the next three months. While the old Auror had the air of someone who'd been through a lot, the young one had the attitude of someone just beginning their career.

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Book&Literature · NyanTa

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lovely

ch 0 2 Pilot- Isaac's Awakening(part 2)

TVD: The Seventh Original

TVD: The Seventh Original

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