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Dubyas
LV 1Greetings. My name is Dubyas, but people call me Dubs. I love fictional novels, but hold a strong affinity for sci-fi in particular. I hope all of my interactions can be friendly and beneficial. PBWY.
2023-02-25 Joined United StatesBadges 3
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A very interesting story. I enjoyed the background and setting. The author has a bright future ahead of them should they decide to keep writing. Writing quality: The first two chapters are written very well, though I would suggest that the author try to keep the same quality consistent throughout their story. Stability of updates: It's only 5 chapters for now, so I can't say much here, but it does seem like it's updated regularly. Story development: Though it feels a bit rushed at times, the author has a strong sense of moving the story along at an engaging and thrilling pace. Character design: Though we are introduced to the characters early, they all feel very unique and thought out. I would recommend that the author take extra time to detail their characters throughout the story, but again, the novel is it it's early stages. World background: A very nice take on a fantasy world. Magic feels grounded and logical and gives a low-mid fantasy feeling throughout. Overall, a very enjoyable read. I wish the author the best of luck as they continue writing. Happy reading.
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An unpolished description, not quite as gruesome as I had in mind. Apologies if it does not suffice.
My father showed me a Prowler once when I was 6. They're terrifying creatures that like to peel off the skins of animals and wear them like clothing. If you've never seen a deer walking on two legs with it's skin looking like it's about to fall off, count yourself lucky. I couldn't sleep at all that night. My mother had to stay with me for half the night so I would calm down.
Sanguis et Os
Fantasy · Dubyas
Reality is often sobering.
I'll probably freeze to death before getting vengeance.
Sanguis et Os
Fantasy · Dubyas
Yes. I only have so much control over the characters and their actions. I'm trying to keep the story as close to the game as possible.
ch 0 1 Chapter 0001: Death and Squalor
Sanguis et Os
Fantasy · Dubyas
Here is a working link as well. https://www.webnovel.com/book/sanguis-et-os_25722850006949805
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Unfortunate. The novel itself is called Sanguis et Os. Thank you.
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An interesting novel with a unique premise, the author is very imaginative with their story telling. Having only four chapters, I am excited to see where the story goes. The writing quality suffers a bit. The author uses words that are too similar to each other in the same sentence. I've also noticed struggles in pluralization, punctuation, and sentence structure. The author does have strong points, such as descriptive and vivid language. The story development is a bit choppy, the MC always moving from one place to the next without much in-between. While it is fast-paced, it doesn't feel quite right to be jumping around so much. Likewise, the character design is rough. While the MC is described as cold and numb, a masochist for depressive thoughts, he seems to involved with the world to match his description. The MC's name also fluctuates, which may hold some context that I am missing. The world background is also confusing. It uses a classic system, but not enough background is put into the world to allow me to feel immersed. I often found myself having more questions then there were answers provided. The author is imaginative. I'm sure the novel has had a rough start, but overtime will get better as the author grows. Happy writing.
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Thank you for the extremely thorough and well written review. I hope that my writing will reach more people and inspire them to write as well, but keeping a small audience is just as gratifying. Happy Reading.
Sanguis et Os
Fantasy · Dubyas