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I'm just a maniac who falls in love with novel characters and dreams about them. Guys, don't mind me

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ch 0 9 Nobody Fights & saves a girl (another heroine - maybe)

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Fantasy · DevilDarkness

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In general, I liked the novel, but it is a bit disturbing that the internal monologues and psychology of the characters are presented superficially. So look at it this way, they just killed over twenty people and it was presented as a situation as if they were used to it. But no, this is their first murder and it would be better if we could at least focus on their current psychology a little more. These are the things that add weight to the novel and make it more realistic and reflect the events better in the mind. It would be nice if the characteristic features of the characters could be brought to the fore so that we could know not only what they do, but also their mindset and what their immediate reactions might be when a situation occurs, and that we can regard them as normal. Also, I realize it's still early days, but it would be nice if we knew a little bit about what kind of world the created world is and what kind of structure it has. As far as I understand, it is a modern but fantastic world, but what does this world contain, what are the building structures, what is the harmony between people, what are the other countries in the world they live in, and what is the country they live in like. These kinds of things draw people into the novel and enable me to read the novel written by the author with more focus. Anyway, I talked too much, these are my personal thoughts and I don't have any bad intentions, I just wanted to make a joke. In the previous chapters, I praised the different features of the novel, now I wrote the things that I think need to be improved. I will continue reading the novel and I hope it gets better.

ch 20 Chapter 18 - Barbecue

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ch 0 2 Chapter 2 - Brothers

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