Webnovel Author: krish_patel - Novel Collection

Kind of anti-hero but not edgy he got morals

And no harem

Not much focus on romance for volume one. However it will come later in the story

Hi, Author here. This is my first time writing a novel. It's a dark fantasy Isekai, This story has some familiar Isekai genre elements, but I've added my own unique twists to make it fresh and interesting (not adding the annoying troupes). I would be grateful if you could take a moment to read the prologue and discover what sets my novel apart. If you find it interesting, I am confident that you will enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you for your time!

Thank you! I will keep that in mind

This was a interesting read. Characters: The characters are good, feel three dimensional and real. The mc is great too. Story development: The pace is a bit slow in the start but the interesting worldbuilding make up for it. Writing quality: It is good but there are some grammatical errors such as there is no capital letters at the start of paragraph. A rewrite would fix it. Overall, if you like fantasy with academy elements then you should give it a try. Good luck and keep up the great work.

Amazing! This has the potential to be a great system novel. Characters:The characters are good. Eden is well written and a great mc.He is not too arrogant nor too humble. Side characters are good as well. Writing quality: It is good but there are some tying mistakes. Story development: The pace is amazing, the fast pace will hook you into reading. The worldbuilding is very interesting and unique. The system itself is my favorite part in the story. Overall, if you love system novel with likeable characters, great worldbuilding, and a awesome system then u should give it a try.

Thanks!

Thanks for the review!

This book is interesting! It got amazing characters(morally gray), good pace, the chapters are intense, the fight scenes are good and great writing quality. For improvement: I read this on the app, and there is no synopsis, u need to add that. The sentence structure needs to be improved. The paragraph are well written but are too lengthy, break them into shorter ones.

Thanks for the detailed review!

Thanks!

Great start! Looking forward to this story, the worldbuilding is interesting. Still waiting for the updates Good luck!

Thanks for the detailed review!

Thanks!

This is a great slice of life novel! It got good characters, good pace, and great overall writing quality! I think of making chapter more lengthy Good luck!