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The first two chapters of Gravity Reign have been uploaded. Hope you enjoy <3
ch 21 Gravity Dominion rewrite --> Gravity Reign
Gravity Dominion
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Haha, it has been nice talking to you. I look forward to any other perspectives you have while reading, so don't be shy about commenting.
Immediately, Yune tried decreasing the gravity once again, feeling his body become lighter yet again. "Nice, it decreased around 3%!" Said Yune, a slight smile forming on his face.
Gravity Dominion
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That's a valid point. My view on it was that Yune had done a few small experiments while at Alvin's training room, using a different amount of mana each time to decrease his weight. Using that, combined with having gotten a sort of natural feeling for it after having used his powers a few times, Yune could roughly estimate his weight reduction. (P.S. this was also an estimation for Yune. His so called weight reduction of "around 3%" could have also roughly been 2% to 5% haha) But thank you for the comment, it was fun for me to think about this again as I didn't really have an immediate answer to it.
Immediately, Yune tried decreasing the gravity once again, feeling his body become lighter yet again. "Nice, it decreased around 3%!" Said Yune, a slight smile forming on his face.
Gravity Dominion
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I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. I will continue uploading a new chapter daily, and I will try to do double uploads this weekend <3
ch 11 Unexpected Gains
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That will be revealed in a later chapter
ch 10 Chapter 10. Sunrise and fall
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Not at all. I am a new writer, so I appreciate every bit of feedback.
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I am not planning on it being a harem.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Loss
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I will keep that in mind going forward
ch 11 Chapter 11. Trust
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Thank you very much for the feedback. I have changed it in all the chapters and will make sure to use the right one going forward.
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I will try to release a chapter daily.
ch 0 9 Chapter 9. Evaluation
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I am not planning on it being one.
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Well, I suppose they wasted all the money on the delicious food they prepare for the top students.
After looking around for a bit Bora Yun had to leave, because only students were allowed on campus. Hanuel and Sook Baek said goodbye to Bora Yun before heading to their dormitories. Arriving at their room it dawned upon them that they only had the key for one room…. They would be sharing a room.
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Thank you very much for your comments. I have made sure to correct the mistakes you mentioned.
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This first week I will definitely upload daily. After that I will consistently upload at least 3 chapters a week, and hopefully more if I can!
ch 0 2 Unidentified Mark
Gravity Reign
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