Thank you, I try my best between actions and dialogue.
ch 78 Following the script
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
I will try my best, it's my first time doing anything like this and in reality I'm quite uninterested in physical romance so trying to depict everything as plausible needs some thinking over, despite the fact it looks interesting in some animes's, moments,.. Don't hesitate to correct me.
ch 79 A moment of so called bliss
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
I'm already very pleased with your chapter, it was fun. You did a great job, don't forget to take a rest as there is no need for more when one is already considered perfect.
ch 77 It's so exhausting, trying to survive
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
It is my greatest honour. I hope you continue to support me and give me tips whenever needed.
ch 77 It's so exhausting, trying to survive
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
So I finally had the time to watch Robocco and me. I was quite confused at te fact each episode is just a few minutes. (thought I just couldnt'tfind the full ones) Either way I watched and I read your story. Good job! I could actually see that being an episode. In fact the supermadoka who plays shogi in air would be quite lit. Btw after watching I understand the knee reference(KNEEver) nice touch!
ch 77 It's so exhausting, trying to survive
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
Still learning how to write better and such so thank you. awesome to hear you have written your own. I still havent' had time to watch or read yet so thank you for the warning. I'm hoping maybe tomorrow or overmorrow. Either way I will read it and will let you know. Great job and thanks for letting me know.
ch 77 It's so exhausting, trying to survive
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
I searched it up because frankly I was quite clueless as to what you meant. So it's a manga and an anime? It sounded interesting and funny when I read the description so I might just watch it in the future.
ch 76 A step further
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
First time experience. We all need to learn and that we do trough mistakes. Be sure to let me know how you would go about it. Then I'll take your ideas with me when I renew this chapter and delete the repeated.
ch 0 4 Reliving the best and worst
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
He did just die so.. you're totally right.one of my first chapter and very lacking.I have much to learn but I mostly do it for myself. Either way if you have tips do tell.Further down to road I might just do everything anew since I have more knowledge of my own ideas know.Please be patient if you continue with this story with me.
ch 0 3 Embracing rebirth
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
Well it is after all a big part of fantasy and everywhere that is reality follows. Disappointing most of the times as it leaves you feeling ostracized.Small things become big and just like that you feel the cruelty and unfairness that lives within us all. Society and it's norms worsening it, not caring about reason or your choice in said matters.Although I am aware that the quote also served as funny memes countless times.But this is slice of life so there will be serious things happening.
ch 29 village of death
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya
Very precise and isn't that just suspicious?
And who knows what? Cyra..Cyra..Cyra what are you thinking or planning?
ch 83 fight and act
The Dark Rebirth: A Vampire's Descent into Darkness
Fantasy · Myst_Rinnontoya