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2023-03-11 Joined Canada
They will get upgrades.
- ESP: In a 20 metre radius, you can see people through walls, check their cultivation level, see their names, age, and what weapon they're holding. (Disabled)
Fantasy · XRavenX
No, only special characters. The only characters I have with a special like slang is so far is, Lu Feng, Lin Siyu, Lin Xinyu (Child-like + hot tempered), and Lin Chenyu. I have plans for three others, but they won’t be introduced for another 50ish chapters. Also the slang will be toned down in the future. I’m mainly doing this so it sets the persons personality.
"Should the sands of three decades pass and your heart yet remain unbound, mark my words: I shall return, and upon that time, deliver a lesson through the might of my will. Three centuries and more grace your existence, while your kin has found familial bliss. Though cultivation thrives within you, the tapestry of social bonds awaits further weaving."
Fantasy · XRavenX
I also want to note, she’s only at the third stage of Qi refinement, and it’ll only take longer in the future. I don’t want to build an OP MC right at the beginning as I find it hard to build the mc character and the others around her.
[Strength: 18.1]
Fantasy · XRavenX
I did think about this when I made the chapter, but I felt like this would be better for various reasons. 1. She’ll have multiple different skills in the future, therefore she can’t solely rely on just cultivating. 2. She 15 and hasn’t cultivate at all, so doing this kinda helps for future development. 3. I did some math. She was at 3. Something before this (can’t remember off the top of my head) therefore she’d only need to cultivate 12 cycles to get where she’s at, which is possible. So it isn’t unreasonable for her to have such a high level.
[Strength: 18.1]
Fantasy · XRavenX
Thank you very much. I’ll do couple of extra chapters tomorrow
ch 0 9 Wait? He’s that Raven on the internet?
Urban · XRavenX
Yea, that will happen in the next chapter
ch 38 Maths Tournament
Urban · XRavenX
I’m aware of this. The next few chapters will mainly follow Raven now and the romance will be lowered. I just been busy with exam so I just wrote what was easy at the time (which was 11 chapters) so I wouldn’t miss out on updates.
ch 36 Back to school
Urban · XRavenX
Thank you
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Urban · XRavenX
Sorry! Had 6 products due this week (not even finished them) and two exams coming up so I got a tight schedule. I have writen 6 chapters today so you don’t have to worry about the updates anymore.
ch 28 1 day left before Christmas
Urban · XRavenX
No, busy with exams, will continue it on Wednesday with daily updates
ch 27 Chapter 27: Date night
Urban · XRavenX
Yes, he just started high school…
In grade 11, he attended 8 classes and achieved a 95, while most of the class averaged a 54.
Urban · XRavenX
Hinting at the relationship between them seems more than normal.
An old couple who were walking by looked at the two and sighed. "Isn't good to be young."
Urban · XRavenX
Omg! I messed up so bad 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 why didn’t I see this during the editing?!?! I meant to say the kids where six at the time before his rebirth!
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Urban · XRavenX
I find it is out of respect not to ask why you’re adopted, and to be glad that they did. They’ll tell once they feel comfortable.
Raven motioned with a flourish of his hand. "No need to be surprised. I found out a couple of days ago while experimenting with my blood sample when I was bored."
Urban · XRavenX
I mean for class was Vanessa just making Ravens past memories come back. As YouTube and twitch, it doesn’t take that much to understand it. I guess you can say when he was study the extra information when he was reborn. And still, he had breaks to do such thing like the whole summer holiday when he was reborn. But now, he’s been going at a project that needs multiple different fields to even get it to work, with little to no breaks. So much information without even taking a break will cause a toll on his brain. That’s how I perceive it though.
ch 21 Laser Tag!
Urban · XRavenX
I messed up. It should be fourth stage on the system panel, but I forgot to change it… thanks for pointing it out. FYI, every time Qi increase by 10 it’ll increase the realm by on stage during the Qi Refinement period.
"Entered the Fourth stage of Qi Refinement. Not bad."
My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.
Fantasy · XRavenX