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what a hooking beginning

Life is indeed full of pain, and in that moment, as I gazed out the window, the weight of the world seemed to bear down upon me. The darkness that swirled outside mirrored the turmoil within my soul. It was a world where fear and prejudice reigned, where the whispers of hatred echoed through the streets.

The Villain's Lament

The Villain's Lament

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However, as I raised the sword to my throat, a moment of confusion washed over me. The faces around me seemed to move in slow motion, their gazes directed downward. Questions raced through my mind—had I truly inflicted harm upon myself? The encroaching darkness only intensified my sense of uncertainty. Yet, amidst the growing shadows, I could hear the urgent voices of those nearby, running towards me, their concern palpable.

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what

"Hey, Elenore," he began, his voice tinged with uncertainty. "I know you won't accept this peasant, but let me hear you out." I locked eyes with him, my face displaying unwavering determination. "Okay," I replied, my voice steady. "I accept to marry him."

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world background is good I'm curious about character development. pilot is good but writing quality well it's fun to read good job

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