Ebei_Lijan - Profile

Great improvement from previous chapters, story is now more understandable. I rarely read horror fiction like this but was able to go through 6 chapters without screaming. 👏👏👏👏👏 Best of luck bro

Woooooooooow I need something with a mystery thriller vibe like this, Writer does a good job in keeping the grammar neat, description ls clear and the pace of the story encourages us to read more chapters All the best man, I rate this book 10/10 It's like I am going to watch "Ancient detective" again though on another level

This is more lively and fresh even when story sounds familiar. I had say give it a try for twenty minutes before you quit it. Was more like watching a real movie Infront of men

Grammar and punctuation should be improved, give spacing to some sentences so we can understand who has said what story is good. Characters are intriguing The romance may be cliche but twisted. Bes of luck