The Bloodied Chessboard

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Sherryann_Martinez

Great work Author omg, amazing descriptions, awesome storyline, perfect grammar I simply love it. I totally recommend this book 👏👏👍💐

LV 13

AceAmbrosia

The synopsis is well-written, and the initiation of the story is engaging. The writing quality is pretty good, and the plot of the story itself is quite entertaining. Keep up the good work, author!

LV 3

Marckaroni

Amazing. The synopsis is very well written and intruiging and the novel did not disappoint one bit. It is rare to see something this unique on webnovel and I appreciate it. The pace is good and the descriptions are perfect. Overall a great novel.

LV 12

TheWanderingBard

This author has great potential. His plotline is interesting. Grammar is impeccable, it definitely has great potential to be a top novel in the future! Let's the climb to the top together fellow author

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LazyErosage

Firstly, congratulations on creating a gripping and intense story. Your plot has all the elements of a successful thriller novel - a high-stakes game, mounting tension, and a protagonist facing his inner demons. It's clear that you've put a lot of thought into developing the character of Aric, and the struggle he faces with his second personality is a unique and interesting twist. However, it's important to ensure that this doesn't come across as stigmatizing or demonizing mental illness. So, be mindful of how you portray this aspect of your character. My advice to you as an author would be to continue to develop the plot with care and attention to detail. Ensure that the pacing remains consistent and the tension builds in a way that keeps the reader engaged. You might also want to consider exploring the backstory and motivations of your antagonist, to make them a more complex and compelling character. Overall, keep up the good work, and remember that writing is a process of constant refinement. Keep honing your craft and seeking feedback from beta readers or editors to make your story the best it can be. Good luck! 👍

Woooooooooow I need something with a mystery thriller vibe like this, Writer does a good job in keeping the grammar neat, description ls clear and the pace of the story encourages us to read more chapters All the best man, I rate this book 10/10 It's like I am going to watch "Ancient detective" again though on another level