i will continue soon
ch 25 Memories
Fantasy · hashmolla001
i will continue
Isn't Grammarly an AI language program? but well about the mc it is hard to explain his past life but there will be a whole arc about it ... I remember it was chapter 88 to 93
Suddenly, an insatiable hunger assailed him, as if he had starved for days on end. "My head feels light, and the pangs of hunger are overwhelming. It appears I have lost copious amounts of blood and languished in this dark abyss for an extended period. This hunger, it seems, was the very trial the child sought to partake in."
Fantasy · hashmolla001
actually i already wrote everything to chapter 110 so cant change it sorry ... but tian phai power wont disappoint you
ch 23 Why? nothing make since .
Fantasy · hashmolla001
thank you for the nice review
nope it is not
ch 18 Bloodlines
Fantasy · hashmolla001
done ... better now ?
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Fantasy · hashmolla001
yes but not all of the names in the novel Chinese
Further to the right, one of the four girls stood. She had an average appearance, with a fair oval face. The name displayed in front of her was Putong Megwai, meaning "common rose."
Fantasy · hashmolla001
cant say a lot tbh
ch 0 5 Completion of Equipment and Improvement of Poison Effects
Fantasy · hashmolla001
nope i explained that it is fragmented and not clear form him
ch 0 2 The Struggle Within the Darkness
Fantasy · hashmolla001
and before you ask yes I am the original author and the translator ..
Suddenly, an insatiable hunger assailed him, as if he had starved for days on end. "My head feels light, and the pangs of hunger are overwhelming. It appears I have lost copious amounts of blood and languished in this dark abyss for an extended period. This hunger, it seems, was the very trial the child sought to partake in."
Fantasy · hashmolla001
yes it is his thoughts ... and why the writing way is weird it is because i translate this novel from my own language ... in Arabic it is not that weird to describe things this way . after all of this i use Grammarly to correct and find better ways to phrase everything .. in the end enjoy the novel and thank you for commenting
Suddenly, an insatiable hunger assailed him, as if he had starved for days on end. "My head feels light, and the pangs of hunger are overwhelming. It appears I have lost copious amounts of blood and languished in this dark abyss for an extended period. This hunger, it seems, was the very trial the child sought to partake in."
Fantasy · hashmolla001
Hmm pretty interesting can't say much but it's pretty good so far. It is worth reading with good potential( if the author doesn't disappear in the middle )
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Fantasy · just_reading12