I like to read, and that’s pretty much it.
2023-04-18 Joined Faroe Islands
This story is beautiful detailed. The surrounding are described well, and the characters are described in detail allowing us to have a sense what they look like. Each chapter has a lot of content and isn’t slow at all. The story seems to have some inspiration from SMT but also keeping it unique in its own right. I also saw some Pokémon and Naruto references which just stood out for me for some reason. Overall a pretty good read for what content it has now.
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No, I have other stuff to do…
ch 0 2 Black Zetsu
Anime & Comics · Kalinin
Nah, he had chakra meaning he could use ninjutsus and other stuff. I feel like giving him a grimoire would make it confusing.
ch 0 3 Training
Anime & Comics · Kalinin
It’s not
ch 0 2 Black Zetsu
Anime & Comics · Kalinin
Rinnegan when reaches 90%
Template: Uchiha Itachi (SO6P level)
Anime & Comics · Kalinin
Scaled his power to the level of Sage of six path. With the power shown in the black clover manga, I thought it would be fine
Template: Uchiha Itachi (SO6P level)
Anime & Comics · Kalinin
Will's eyes widened as he stared at the two, wondering if he had taken too much of that nose candy.
Urban · XRavenX
Is that even legal in Canada?
"Oh, I also wish to marry at 16."
Urban · XRavenX
Better chapter. Beginning could be improved
ch 0 9 Wait? He’s that Raven on the internet?
Urban · XRavenX
Weird sentence. You should just get rid of solution
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Urban · XRavenX
Like it so far, keep it up.
ch 0 4 Becoming famous overnight
Urban · XRavenX
I mean, he did mention that he was in grade nine last chapter and that Mia was in grade 10. That’s a one year age difference.
As he made his way downstairs, the scent of waffles and bacon wafted up to meet him, and he could see his mother, sister, and brother already seated around the breakfast table.
Urban · XRavenX
Could break up this paragraph to improve readability, but I guess it’s fine having as it is now.
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Urban · XRavenX
Like it so far.
ch 0 6 Underground Bloodhole
Soul Swallowing Goddess
Fantasy · Gibeu