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NinaChroni
female LV 2Lost soul, seeking sense within the absurdities of this tragic world. Awkward,screwup, insane, desperate to breathe again. Words, bring her peace.
2023-04-13 Joined United StatesBadges 5
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No, I'm sorry it wasn't clear She's her mother.
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The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
She did it because she could. She was bored, and it amused her.
The Queen looked at Talon, "Your father was too busy with Oleander to bother protecting his queen and his realm."
The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
She was kinda like a sociopath. She just didn't care. He wronged her and embarrassed her - his price to pay was death.
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The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
No, she was trying to forgive her mother too, but her mother was making it difficult. Actually, she blames Talon's mom Anise.
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The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
I am glad you are thinking about the mother. I do believe it is a little of both, but I have a feeling we will be getting more on that situation in the future.
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The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
It's a flower that is poisonous.
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The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
She is, but her father never got tested for the gene that makes them immune, and neither did she...well her mom said differently. We're going to have to wait and see how that turns out.
Her Aunt sighed, "No one ever told you because we didn't know if you were immune."
The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
I'm sorry, I'll work on fixing that. The connections are affuent people her aunt has already met. People with money and power. That's how Geneve was able to skip town after she killed her mother.. I say it later, but I guess it should be mentioned here as well. They are Fae. They can easily control humans.
She reluctantly decided to let her aunt live. She needed her so she could start a life somewhere new. She just could not live among all these ghosts. Adonis had already garnered numerous connections, and she may need her again one day.
The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
Pain can do a lot to a person. Trauma has a way of changing a person forever. There are three main characters, and they all deal with their trauma differently. Sometimes bad things that happen to us and it points us exactly where we were meant to be.... sometimes they don't. Cross your fingers for Geneve. There i a still quite a long road for her to travel ❤️❤️
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The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
Same.
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Khalifa: Queen in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · HeatherReader
This was a unique beggining, for sure. It was pretty good. It left me with some questions that make me want to read the next chapter, in hopes of getting answers. That is exactly what a first chapter is supposed to do.
ch 0 1 Where am I this time?
Khalifa: Queen in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · HeatherReader
I am definitely a writer who thrives on constructive criticism. What information do you feel is lacking? I am writing an addition to chapter two already, based on suggestions.
ch 0 1 The Sins of Our Parents
The Destiny of Three
Sci-fi · NinaChroni
I am so impressed about the way you word things. Nicely done.
ch 0 2 She's Flying!
The Legendary Witch's Pet is a Werewolf
Fantasy · ricebucket0_0
Great starting! I love how descriptive this is. It really sucks you in.
ch 0 1 Capture of a Witch
The Legendary Witch's Pet is a Werewolf
Fantasy · ricebucket0_0
Unfortunately, it only has one chapter, but it's a really good one. I feel as if I know the characters, and the story makes you want to read on. Not the typical story I've seen on here, but very worth the read.
GAME of Wrenches
Urban · Melindawrites