This chapter is good and no Chinese vibes.
ch 20 Chapter 19: Ito's Special Yakitori!
Anime & Comics · mythoast
yeah, maybe you can work on your dailogues. I've read more than 200 mtl novels, and I'm certain that your way of writing dailogues quite matches mtl fics. And yeah, the major factor would be Alice, I suggest you to watch her clips and grasp the way she speaks.
ch 19 Chapter 18: King of Flavors, MSG!
Anime & Comics · mythoast
Why do I feel like I am reading a Chinese novel. The first 5 chapters didn't gave me this vibe.
ch 19 Chapter 18: King of Flavors, MSG!
Anime & Comics · mythoast
Chi..Chinese?
"Only you? It's too simple. I can even defeat your father..."
Anime & Comics · mythoast
She felt like she was a fairy dancing in a dream. A strange cocoon materialized before her. With a sudden crack, it split open, revealing Tsuna wearing a prince attire with fairy like wings on his back. She offered her hand for a dance. Yet, in a swift and unexpected move, he cuts her wings and caged her for eternity.
Suddenly, her vision seemed to blur, and the taste shattered her soul, transporting her into another world where she felt like she was a fairy dancing in a dream.
Anime & Comics · mythoast
If love is all about speed then what are u gonna do with the extra mins?.
Love is about speed.
Anime & Comics · akikan40
In my opinion, change this world.
By the way, I have never asked, but do you like the world of the "High School of the Dead" and want me to focus on it?
Anime & Comics · akikan40
was jade?
According to what he had learned a few days ago, her name wasJade, and she was about the same age as him.
Anime & Comics · AngelicTL
Shinometa.
Just to ask, what is currently the most popular harem or romance story?
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Is he a student of some top G cuz he is seeing girl as a object.
Yet, there was no doubt Rei was delicious.
Anime & Comics · akikan40
yes, jjk and pls jump at Kenjaku.
[Do you want to go to another world?]
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Only friend who can take W is best friend.
Her boyfriend died, and her childhood friend was so unreliable.
Anime & Comics · akikan40
This dailouge cringed me so hard that I took a 5 min break. ( Literally every Chinese protag talk like this )
"You bastard! How dare you look down on my dream!!"
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
JJk, we play jumping.
I plan to go with Danmachi, One Piece, or JJK, but what do you think?
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Sigh~unrealistic as heck...there is no way such low iq people exist. Nevermind I just open X.
At this moment, everyone had their trust in Shido, and they supported him in leaving Isao and his group by the bus, leaving all of them to die being surrounded by those "things" in the convenience store.
Anime & Comics · akikan40
My hentai mind just took over me and imagined some hentai plots for the og mc.
Isao pushed Rei away slightly, surprising her with his polite reaction and ashamed of her impure thoughts. "I will save him." He then looked at Saya and said, "Takagi-senpai, take the lead."
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Ye Fang, Lin Chuang and 69 others has sent you friend request.
He lowered his tone as he declared, "Food War! I'm sure you will end up crying..."
I Cook My Way Through The Multiverse!
Anime & Comics · mythoast