Webnovel Author: Immanuel_J - Novel Collection

8mth

Replied to Thefallenimmortal

Thank you i think ive gotten better with the grammar and time skips in the later chapters. Soon im going to go back and edit the first chapters to fix those mistakes. Also I am 16

Never Oppress The Enemy

Fantasy · Immanuel_J

Immanuel_J

9mth

Commented

My favor part of this chapter was the fight between Yuu and Sara

ch 0 2 Beginning of a New Chapter

Destiny of Parallels

Fantasy · SimplyWill

Immanuel_J

9mth

Commented

I like the main characters I can’t wait to see how they grow in the story

ch 0 1 The Beginning

Destiny of Parallels

Fantasy · SimplyWill

Immanuel_J

11mth

Replied to JA_Chrysant

By a class of his own I meant that NoTe was better than all other kids his age So there was no who could really compete with him even Rev who was able to keep up with him couldn’t just beat him if that makes sense

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Never Oppress The Enemy

Fantasy · Immanuel_J

Immanuel_J

11mth

Replied to JA_Chrysant

I did struggle with making the paragraphs easy to read In later chapters I made them shorter and more clear for the reader I also switched from a phone to a computer so the paragraphs might look longer depending on what your reading on

ch 0 1 Chapter 1