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I will change the wording, it is not remote.
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There is really nothing else that happens during this month-long period, so there would not be enough to write about
One month later, Chao Feng had finished making the seventy or so spiritual meals that would last Chao Yuan around twenty days, the time it would take for Chao Feng to finish the Black Dragon Academy Admission Test.
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Rewrote chapter 1
Black Dragon Academy, far past Great Chao City and into the remote countryside.
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I see. I think that I should not rewrite the entire thing and only rewrite the bad parts of the story, while also adding new parts such as his backstory. I will begin on that now
Black Dragon Academy, far past Great Chao City and into the remote countryside.
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Yeah, I will start to include his journey to these places and not just go from one scene to another
Black Dragon Academy, far past Great Chao City and into the remote countryside.
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I will explain it eventually
In the Lower Chaotic Realm, the Black Dragon Academy was one of the most prestigious institutes, but it was also one of the hardest to be admitted to. The admission test commenced in four days, and before then, Chao Feng needed to reach the Black Dragon Academy, awaken his dantian and have a basic foundational understanding of cultivation to even have a slight chance to pass the test.
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I envisioned it to be, with one rear gate that only certain people could access and the main gate, which everyone could
The Black Dragon Academy was surrounded by a large square black gate with a huge logo in the middle that was cut in half due to it also being the doors of the gate.
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Eastern · _DragonAsura
What do you mean?
The actual main building was larger than the Chao Divine Clan Branch Palace and it had the entire countryside as its garden. There were many smaller building that were around the size of the palace dotted around the main building.
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Eastern · _DragonAsura
Are you talking about exact meas ourements?
The actual main building was larger than the Chao Divine Clan Branch Palace and it had the entire countryside as its garden. There were many smaller building that were around the size of the palace dotted around the main building.
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Eastern · _DragonAsura
I will begin to do that. Describing places is honestly my largest weak point when it comes to writing
ch 0 2 Prologue(2)
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Eastern · _DragonAsura
Thank you for the advice. I do agree with you that the pacing is too fast, I will begin to slow it down. I didn’t consider that the clan would already have spiritual chefs, that is my fault. I do not understand what you mean by this, does not have one what? Now that you mention it, it would have better to go in depth on his backstory. Maybe in the future, I can expand on it.
ch 0 2 Prologue(2)
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Eastern · _DragonAsura
My discord is DragonKaneki#3080
ch 16 Talking with Chao Zheng
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