Webnovel Author: Seiji_Shura - Novel Collection

Seiji_Shura

11mth

Replied to King_Degenerate

😅 I use grammarly and Google docs at the same time. Look like it's not enough

ch 0 1 God hunter system : the poor hunter.

God hunter system : The punisher

Fantasy · Seiji_Shura

Seiji_Shura

11mth

Replied to King_Degenerate

😂😂 i'm not good with names

This paragraph has been deleted.

God hunter system : The punisher

Fantasy · Seiji_Shura

Seiji_Shura

11mth

Replied to King_Degenerate

don't worry about it. I'm that kind of person who says things like je thinks. I'm still at work so I can read more but after, I will read your entiere book

Atop a massive hill that reached toward the heavens, a colossal castle with the signboard writing "divine academy" stood in all its grandeur. Its towers pierced the clouds, casting a shadow over the land below. Surrounding the hill is a forest filled with vibrant hues resembling a rainbow. The gentle breeze rustled the leaves, masking the aggressive growls of the hidden figures. The sky wore a somber grey complexion, devoid of the comforting warmth of the sun, while the ground had cracks and signs of drought.

Raymond's Payback

Fantasy · King_Degenerate

Seiji_Shura

11mth

Commented

I like it, you can perfectly immerse yourself in it. I feel like I'm in front of the place described.

Atop a massive hill that reached toward the heavens, a colossal castle with the signboard writing "divine academy" stood in all its grandeur. Its towers pierced the clouds, casting a shadow over the land below. Surrounding the hill is a forest filled with vibrant hues resembling a rainbow. The gentle breeze rustled the leaves, masking the aggressive growls of the hidden figures. The sky wore a somber grey complexion, devoid of the comforting warmth of the sun, while the ground had cracks and signs of drought.

Raymond's Payback

Fantasy · King_Degenerate

Seiji_Shura

11mth

Replied to King_Degenerate

Hello dear, thank you for this review. in fact, the basis here is that God created the system but the system is self-contained. It doesn't read emotions and desires, it randomly selects humans it deems capable of fighting through the rifts. But it cannot judge the hearts of these humans, so when God looks at what the endowed humans have become, he has taken it into his head to punish them by using another human. In the fifth chapter, the way to punish them is announced and the explanation will come in the next chapter (which I am writing) the protagonist will be like an observer at each stage, he will have to judge the behavior of the hunters and see how he can punish them according to the freedom conferred on him by the power that God will have chosen adequate.

This system grants chosen humans supernatural strength and abilities to fight against demons and monsters. The chosen humans can develop their abilities until they reach high ranks giving them privileges in society. But the more powerful they became, the more arrogant the hunters behaved and began to abuse their power over normal humans.