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I agree with you I don’t want to spoil anything that’s going to happen but I will tell you he’s definitely going to be doing his own thing and not in Oliver’s shadow
ch 0 3 chapter 3. Castaway
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
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the paragraph you commented on says what the third wish is. The first wish, become Oliver Queens brother. The second wish, all of wolverines abilities. The third wish, all of Batman abilities. And finally it’s not a wish but god granted Logan(MC) system/template to slowly gain the abilities of Batman and wolverine. So if you would continue reading you will see in chapter two his claws are still bone but I will have a solution to the admantium poisoning once he gains the admantium exoskeleton.
For my second, wish I want all of wolverines abilities even his adamantium bones. God pauses me and says you can have that as your second wish but you won't get all of his abilities from the beginning you must unlock his abilities overtime. I agree with him and continue to my third and final wish which I ask for all of Batman's abilities as well. God agrees, but says like with wolverines abilities I must unlock it over time.
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Thank you for commenting I hope you continue to read my story even if there’s things you don’t like about it
ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Prologue
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Ok thank you for the advice when I get time I’ll go back and fix that. I’ll make sure to have proper spacing going forward.
Dad what is it " I just wanted to check and see if your ok there's a category 2 storm going on out side and I heard you scream". I'm all good dad sorry for bothering you go check up on Ollie. "Ok but let me know if anything happens" I will dad don't worry. As I heard his footsteps leave I turned from the the door witch I was now standing in front of and went back to lay down on the bed. I needed to calm down and sort everything out a lot had happened in a short span of time.
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Kind of yeah, I was planning on making it to where as he(MC) maxes out his abilities/skills he will get all the knowledge and memories to the particular ability/skill that he maxed out. Thank you for commenting stay updated I plan to drop another chapter by this Friday.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2. The Yacht
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Sorry for the short chapter I plan on make them longer going forward
ch 0 2 Chapter 2. The Yacht
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Finally someone that knows where I was trying to go with this. Amalgam universe [img=recommend] sorry for not uploading but I’ getting back on the grind.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Prologue
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Sorry I haven’t uploaded anything in forever. I’ve been super busy with work i started this when I lost my job and haven’t had time since I got a new one. I didn’t know if I wanted to continue writing on this one because of all the hate and I didn’t want to waste my time. But I’v had a lot more free time on my hand and saw ur comment. So I will not be dropping it and starting next Friday I’m going to try to drop a chapter once a week every Friday. Thank you.
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Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Ps. I don’ know what comics you read but wolverine is not the only one to have hit thanos I can give you a list of people that have Adam warlock, Drax the destroyer, Deadpool, thor and a lot more
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Look at the end of the day your talking about stuff that wolverine learned witch Batman given the same anount of time could learn faster and no wolverine did not learn everything he did in just his youth I don’ know we’re you got that from and I’m pretty sure you can look up on any forum and find out Batman has far better iq I understand that u think it was a waste of a third wish and that’ your opinion thank you for reading and have a blessed day
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
As far as battle iq yes Batman in my opinion has far better battle iq he’ always analyzing his opponents himself and his surroundings cause if he slips up even for a second dead. And as far as the 200 years of battle experience my mc won’t have that anytime soon. He’ll be gaining wolverines template slowly. So really if you boil it down if Batman was given the same amount of time as wolverine (200 yrs) his martial arts and battle iq would be far better. All in all this is all just my opinion so I would love for u to continue to read my work but if it not for u i understand. Thank u for the cordial interactions.
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
It’s been widely debated but wolverines fighting style is based of his healing factor so if he didn’t have his regeneration his martial arts and battle iq are way lower than Batman’s in my opinion. Aslo the arrow is his favorite arrowverse character because he’s one of my favorites.
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Yea I don’ want to say to much and spoil but if already got it worked out admantium poison will be basically cured.
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Yea the direction I’m trying to go with this MC is a weak to OP character. I like your ideas I will keep them in mind while writing going forward. Plz stick around to see how the MC evolves. Thx for the interactions.
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Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
Yea I like your outlook on it and I will definitely take that into consideration moving forward. I wasn’t planning on writing in any omniversal beings anytime soon but I will definitely have to think about that when I do. This is only my 2nd novel I’m writing so if I have any mistakes plz bear with me and feel free to correct me at anytime. Thx for the civil discourse.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Prologue
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris
I’ve finished chapter 4 but I don’t feel like revising it tonight. I don’t want to upload it without revising it because I did that with chapters 1,2, and 3 and a lot of people didn’t like that understandably. So I’m going to be posting chapter 4 tomorrow as well as fix chapter 3. I hope this doesn’t upset to many people. Chapter 4. Welcome to Lian Yu Coming tomorrow
ch 0 3 chapter 3. Castaway
Logan Queen: DC/CW/AU
Anime & Comics · FabianMorris