adrian....
"Don't you dare lie to me! I considered you a friend! And this is how you pay me, huh? Backstabbing me, abducting my mother?!"
Fantasy · Soumajit_Gayen
a really captivating story , and a great start i love how you expressed the emotions that the man had lost his family and how he was used to coming to the cementry as a child then had to see his whole family become a part of it. it really good . i would like to add that puntuation needs a slight fixing like dont add space for the speach marks. it really interesting though kee up nix!
ch 0 1 Prologue ; Shifting soil , blanket of mud
Horror · NixelLazuli
i am a sucker for these kind of descriptions
Alone and unclaimed, this is the only thing remotely close to pleasure that I'll ever feel. Being touched, kissed, stroked is all part of our existence, and I have to admit I feel empty without it most of the time. So, I give myself up to Jake, and he gives me what I want.
LGBT+ · Bistas_She
i love the description here
He held his stomach, he was still hungry, looking at the two corpse Infront of him, he swallowed hard, he came closer to the snake body and but on it, realizing the softness of the skin, he immediately tore a larger portion and swallowed, immediately the meat passed his throat, he fell a hit sensation in his body, and the panel popped up with new information, his eyes widden at the new data showing up.
Fantasy · Poker_mon
hey the structure here is a little bit off use it does not resemble one bit but the story is really nice keep up
"Where did I land?" He surprisingly took it easy and did not panic, "this place does not resemble earth In a slightest, so, the question is, which world did I land on and am I still human?" He checked his body condition and as expected, he was different, he looked behind him and found out he had a tail, he looked at the claws of his had and the thick hair covering his body.
Fantasy · Poker_mon
the best kind of hugs are given by mothers
In his mother's warm embrace, young Blaze calmed down; he felt safe.
Fantasy · Soumajit_Gayen
beautiful really well packed thriller and its really exciting good job
ch 0 2 Debut-E-Hunt
Fantasy · Soumajit_Gayen
aww its heart wreching but beautiful
"He's MY SON!", Nila yelled, "And that should be enough for you to accept him. I do not need your protection nor your name, but my son, he needs you people, he needs a family! Please take him. I beg of you." Nila finally broke down, she was crying; The strong and proud woman seemed like a helpless, little girl.
Fantasy · Soumajit_Gayen
sooo dooo iiii!!!! [img=recommend]
"I hate those who torment the weak the most", someone spoke. Who was it? The girl hastily looked up and her eyes froze at what she saw.
Fantasy · Soumajit_Gayen
really nice discriptions but use occur like and another bright flash occured but with a shattering sound
"Then your wish I shall grant", said the man placing his hand in front of the orb. And another bright flash, but this time with a shattering sound.
Fantasy · Soumajit_Gayen
U know just new expectations
A shadow holding a lantern approached me. Based on the shadow, it was a girl. The light became brighter and the stomping came to a stop. A young girl dressed like a servant walked around the corner and stood right in front of me. She had brown hair tied into a neat bun, with big bright eyes that looked straight at me full of anger.
Eastern · Moonlee_xx
awwww cuteeeeeeeeee
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Fantasy · Lo_rezi00
he is 48 lol
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Urban · mahe_ale_aba
its a really nice read with a great storyline i am waiting for the next chapter!!!!! pls upload soon! i really enjoyed the story and the first chapter keeps u hooked throughout
Vax :Enter The Demifice
Action · Veldarria