Sorry. This chapter was an early attempt so i accidentally ended up using an endgame term. An ageless one is an immortal. But our protagonist isn’t supposed to find this out until much later
First time almost getting duped. First time talking to an Ageless one. First time seeing such powerful magic up close. It all felt surreal yet still, for some reason, real.
Fantasy · RumiusDaylight
I’ll be writing to your discord if u don’t mind, will keep in touch!
Thank you ☺️
Hi, I’m sorry that you didn’t like my novel. I’m a beginner writer so I don’t really understand your comment. Could you expound on what you mean by there being too many inconsistencies? The story still flows sensibly in my opinion. I would like to hear your view so I can improve in further chapters.
ch 32 A Mother’s love
Fantasy · RumiusDaylight
Nani 😂😂😂
Thanks for your comment. I wanted him to be a driven character. As a trasmigrator, he knows instinctively that magic rules so he’s trying to reach it as fast as possible. I also wanted to convey the feeling of having endless possibilities when using magic and how he really resonated with the idea. I guess I didn’t do a very good job 😔
ch 59 Anything
In A World Where Magic Is In English
Fantasy · RumiusDaylight