Webnovel Author: Olcm - Novel Collection

Thanks for the review! I'm going to try and take these criticisms and consider them when writing further chapters. There are a couple things like #5 which I do currently plan to improve on in more recent chapters. Regarding your question about what caused the fate of the MC at the end of the first chapter, I believe I tried to answer a it a little bit in a cryptic message given to the MC in chapter 3 when he asked Why he was chosen. Although looking back I don't think I really got that across well. And I do plan to explain it in further chapters. Sadly I can't tell you anymore right now since the answer to that question is something I don't plan on revealing until near the end, since it will most likely tie into the ending. Overall: Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the criticism. And it should help me improve in writing future chapters!

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