Horus_1998 - Profile

I don't have to say what many have already expressed about this fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Your comment would be valid if the protagonist had not been sold into slavery by his own father and then trained for 10 years by one of the strongest characters in One Piece, literally the MC lacks common sense

There's not much to say about this fic, it's very bad, a very slow story and so out of logic, a boring, empty and clunky protagonist that the only thing I manage to awaken in me is an incredible boredom I don't understand how anyone can like a protagonist who doesn't show any emotion and all he does is nod and act like a fool

The Mc is a simple useless, he doesn't show emotions and yet the author thinks of giving him a harem please I think Chopper would have more chances to achieve that than the Mc, even the haki the Mc doesn't show will for anything I don't know how the haki of the conqueror woke up and to end up as fuck the Mc can't cut a door with how strong he supposedly is or the dark king is an idiot incompetent, or the author makes the MC useless [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Novela cliché típica de Webnovel y autor típico que borra reseñas negativas [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Total disappointment an immature MC who[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] just wants to play family

Good job, I like right now the 2 female love interests who are probably the strongest currently in the canon I don't think you need any more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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If you love Ash so much, do you want her to marry your MC, I don't understand the harem etiquette as a previous comment, is MC part of Ash's harem? And what was the point of the initial pokemon poll if you put a completely different one, making it look like the opinion you asked for from your readers, you didn't care about it at all, it's a very disappointing fic and had potential[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Junk author only deletes negative reviews, deletes the positive ones you put with your other accounts disgusting [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]