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Kaylon
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Yes I’ll read more later and do research on immortals
For this part you can put () if you want for her thoughts. It allows the readers to know that’ her thought process
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Stuck as the Devil Against the World
Fantasy · JaValentin
This has some very good lay out as to what’s going on. Nice 👍🏻👍🏻
She peers her head over the side of the bed seeing a chasm of darkness. Her eyes wriggle with terror. The bed she is laying on floats on an abyss of nothingness. Her depth perception becomes blurry, and her eyes turn nearsighted, forcing her to pull her full body back onto the bed out of fear.
Stuck as the Devil Against the World
Fantasy · JaValentin
So far so good
ch 0 1 Prologue I
Stuck as the Devil Against the World
Fantasy · JaValentin
Mind reading smiling demon?
Mind reading Smiling demon ?
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Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
That’s the idea, it’s only chapter 10
ch 10 Chapter 10: Triumph Amidst Chaos
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
He isn’t helping just telling them what to do, I will make everyhing more clear on the next chapter.
Trying to regroup, Light refocuses his attention on his companions. "Hey, Lily, untie Katelyn so we can get out of here."
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
Trust me villain arc is coming
Light said, "If I hid from those monsters, I would want someone to look for me. I know how they must feel being scared and alone…"
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
Yes I will be writing more chapters soon
Sarah snorted, "Yeah, you wouldn't be alive if we didn't find you."
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
It’s on the second chap ter
Amidst the chaos, I was pushed and trampled on, cursing the cruel world that alienated me while unconscious.
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
Yeah but I’m trying to make him more of a menace to society lol
As they waved their arms to get the army's attention, the soldiers noticed them but were met by an unknown force. A hobgoblin in armor, lance in hand, rode a monstrous horse, leading an army of its own. The human soldiers tried to hold them off, their bullets seemingly ineffective against the hobgoblin's forces.
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
I cut that part out just because he was just home, grounded I didn’t think it would be interesting to the readers but I can add it if more ppl want me to
While in the Lunchroom, as I sat alone, the teacher, Ms. Anderson, approached me with a mix of concern and reproach. "Light, I heard about what happened yesterday. Is everything alright?"
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
Typo I was writing at 4 in the morning
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Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon
Sorry typo
Glaring at Chuck and Mark, Light's voice filled with a sinister aura as he declared, "But this time, I'm going to watch the life fade from their eyes. No one will stop me!"
Smiling Demon
Fantasy · Kaylon