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I don't know who is the protagonist of this story, is it Doflamingo or Rosinante? Rosinante is the one who does all the work and Doflamingo just waits and will be the king of the world I hope the author fixes that and doesn't delete my review

I can't believe it's so hard to find a Ben 10 fic in marvel that's at least so-so, they're all bad and this is no exception, a very silly and manipulable protagonist who thinks he's a genius and is dumber than a rock

In the last few chapters, the supposed 10-year training with the Dark King himself went to waste [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Bored protagonist who doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes, very bad this fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Este fic es como si eligieras lo peor de otros fics de pokémon y lo mesclaras para luego tener una sopa qué si tuvieras todo el hambre de mundo no te comerías, no entiendo la calificación tan alta, que se puede esperar de webnovel igualmente

I only read 10 chapters and I can't handle the cringe that gives this version of Naruto, it's horrifying, he is supposed to have memories of a Naruto hokage and he became an old man but he acts much worse than his time in the academy [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]