I'd just like to say that if you disregard the dark magic and the fact that his means are quite questionable, Grindelwald, unlike Voldy, fights for a worthy cause and even if I don't believe him to be absolutely right, I think he raises a point : just imagine 40 years after Harry Potter. The secret will surely break and then it will be a war. I think that the fight of Grindelwald is to protest his people: for the greater good even if his means are qui questionable which is why I don't particularly like the comparison with Voldemort and the fact that he's viewed as evil or as mad by his own son... Despite that, I think your chapter is quite well written and I'll make sure to enjoy it. Thanks 🙏
ch 0 3 Gellert Grindelwald Under The Imperius Curse?
Movies · Mysteryon
It's the second time you copy Tyrant of Steel with this iconic moment when the hero is speaking to a peasant...
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Whouah ! Isn't your introduction blablant plagiarism ? (It's just the same as one of my favourite novels Tyrant of Steel)
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Apart from that, I must say that I truly like the story. I believe it's one of the best Harry Potter fanfincof this app [img=recommend]
ch 69 Ch 28 Herpo The Great? Part 2
Book&Literature · LazyWizard
So ? He'll certainly become more powerful but how will he be able to save Harry Potter of his "fate" ?
ch 69 Ch 28 Herpo The Great? Part 2
Book&Literature · LazyWizard
It's just the first chapter but it's very good ! I'm absolutely drawn to this story. At first I just wanted to read the synopsis and it was an error but I think I'll read it to the end. You stole my heart with your first chapter. Thanks 🙏
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Are you planning to hold me like this forever?
Urban · Rainbow Bubble Fish
It's not Bad AT all, with all the explanation and the fact that It's almost like an History course about one pièce and the past of the world but there's one Big problem : the way It's written... It's quite hard top read and I Always feel like changing to another novel... Please make it more enjoyable. You just have to change a bit the disposition of the texte and to add a few things liké changing the way WE see thé POV and thé constant changing POV... Apart from that, It's actually suite good. Continue this way please
ch 26 Chapter 26 PREPARATIONS FOR WAR AND HISTORY OF THE GODS VALLEY ,A HINT INTO THE HISTORY OF THE WORLD.
Action · godlyarrogantz_305
Either one or three (shadows or reality)
ch 80 CH 76: Tough Visit
HP: Tainted Desire
Book&Literature · Lazy_Ryuu