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TheWriter117
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Just Ethan's overall charm really, almost every women he meets are attracted to him in the films so this is implented in the fanfic and yes this is just the next day.
Ana laughed, her voice filled with amusement. "Who wouldn't, really? When you talk to him, it's like he's completely in control of the conversation, and he has that confidence. He focuses on you like there's no one else in the room."
Mission: Impossible - Uprising
Movies · TheWriter117
In the previous chapter, it's established that Ethan is light fingered and there's a gadget in Mission: Impossible, specifically in the third movie that lets people people go unconscious. Basically Ethan puts a sticker on CJ that makes him unconscious. As for when Ethan put it, it's when CJ got close to Ethan
"And it's going rather quite well." Ethan quipped with a casual shrug, his demeanor unfazed. Addressing the group, he continued, "Alright, everyone, with that out of the way, get moving and into the mall now."
Mission: Impossible - Uprising
Movies · TheWriter117
It's mandatory lol
Recognizing that her teasing wasn't going to ruffle the unflappable man in front of her, Monica contentedly nestled against Ethan's shoulder, wrapping her arms around him in a tight embrace. Together, they watched the sun dip below the horizon, painting the vast sky in shades of vibrant orange. A gentle breeze tousled her curly blonde hair, adding to the serenity of the moment. From this vantage point, the world took on a semblance of beauty and normalcy. However, Monica was acutely aware that it was merely a fleeting illusion. The constant chaos and destruction caused by the reanimated dead had left an indelible mark on the world. Whether things could ever return to what everyone once knew as "normal" remained uncertain.
Mission: Impossible - Uprising
Movies · TheWriter117
Obviously it's a tight ride lol
The drive back home was uncomfortably silent. The survivors Ethan had picked up mostly kept to themselves, their faces etched with shock and horror as they took in the state of the city.
Mission: Impossible - Uprising
Movies · TheWriter117
Although the prose is solid, the way it is structured is overwhelming and counter-intuitive, the narrative is what really stands out and doesn't waste time setting up the plot and characters along with its world. The concept itself as a whole may not be unique but it still tries hard to distinguish itself from other works in the supernatural genre. Overall, this is an ambitious story that is rough around the edges but worthy enough to give it a try.
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I tried hard not to give them too much descriptions and I wanted the audience to have some imagination on what they look. For example, the story is set in the 70s and when you say Biker, your mind will conjure up that image of that 70s bikers you see on TV or the internet. As for the description of the surrounding, well it's a diner and it has some people in it which the story implicates but doesn't go much into detail what it actually looks like but simply leaves it up to the imagination of the readers
"Oh, just beer and water," Blades grinned wider as his gaze lingered on Monica's figure. "Oh, and lastly, can I have some of that ass of yours? It looks tasty and sweet."
Mission: Impossible - Uprising
Movies · TheWriter117
Knew it
"Your Honor, it is the opinion of the jury that the defendant, Jefferson Adams, is guilty."
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urban · slowestcook
Yeah she's definitely losing
"For a stolen car, that has since been recovered and returned? For the stolen cash that has been covered by insurance? For a stolen laptop that my client willingly surrendered back to its original owner? A laptop that only came into his possession through a purchase that we have fully explained my client had every reason to believe was legitimate, that it is only through the worst possible luck that it turned out to be stolen property? No one has ever contested that the laptop was found in my client's possession, but that in and of itself does nothing to prove that my client stole it. That eyewitnesses identified my client as having been in the area the theft took place proves only that it is the area close to where he lives and works! And the so-called video evidence from the traffic cameras, while bearing a resemblance to my client, we have demonstrated bears an even closer resemblance to a known car thief my client was able to identify from his mugshot as being the man he bought the laptop from."
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urban · slowestcook
Um, she's attracted to her opponent. That is weird but okay
All this flashed through Andrea's mind in a moment. She turned her back to Kyle and focused on keeping her composure. The last thing she needed right now was to start blushing… It didn't matter what Kyle thought of her clothes or her hair, she wasn't wearing it for him! It didn't matter why he was smiling, and whatever tricky games he might be playing wouldn't work if she just ignored him.
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urban · slowestcook
Unfortunately, walking back across the courtroom meant catching a glimpse of the prosecutor's desk. States Prosecutor Kyle Wynn was still wearing that strange little smile he'd had all morning. Not that smiling was strange, but he seemed to spend half his life with a smirk on his face. It was one of the things Andrea hated about him the most, his insufferable smug expression.
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urban · slowestcook
Wow, that's a way to start the story. I'm intrigued.
ch 0 1 Prologue - Waking
Innocent Until Proven Guilty
Urban · slowestcook
That is some anime level over the topness
Man: "This kid will change our future. Being a nobleman, his mana capacity should secure him a noble rank. Our lives will change for the better. Hahaha!"
I AM THE SUPREME RULER- EMPEROR
Fantasy · MEWCHAN19
Sheesh, this dialogue is a little unnatural
Man: "True. This boy is from a noble family. That woman was adorned in luxury, indicating he's not a commoner."
I AM THE SUPREME RULER- EMPEROR
Fantasy · MEWCHAN19
Dialogue is formatted in a sort of a script which is odd
Man: "I don't think anyone was chasing us last night."
I AM THE SUPREME RULER- EMPEROR
Fantasy · MEWCHAN19
Hmm the prose is a little too simple, making it kinda weak
In a humble abode on the outskirts of the capital, a baby named Makoto cries in his cradle. His family consists of a woman who resembles his mother, a man identified as his father, and their daughter. Living as commoners, they lead modest lives.
I AM THE SUPREME RULER- EMPEROR
Fantasy · MEWCHAN19
Ooo 4th wall break, guessing this story probably won't be serious and heavy
Narrator: Hello, dear viewer. Welcome to the story of a man whose journey begins with the label of the weakest Emerger, surrounded by bullies. But how will this tale unfold? Let's find out.
I AM THE SUPREME RULER- EMPEROR
Fantasy · MEWCHAN19
Hmm Ethan Hunt, Jack Reacher vibes? I dunno because I don't see Ethan intimidating almost everyone in the story and acting like he's bigger and superior to everyone. Him and Monica having no chemistry is intentional because Ethan is keeping his distance. I do agree it's a little sterile and lacking emotion in some areas of the story but then again so both the source materials in play. Ethan Hunt himself doesn't get too connected and too open to almost everyone, only that he earn their affections, loyalty, and respect through his actions. He is a bit of a cypher after all. I also agree there's a lack of tension and creativity in the action scenes however this is simply because Ethan is just too OP to be in the Romero/Russo verse. Someone like Ethan is just too skilled and too capable in a verse where it relied on normal people and incompetent people with a lack of resource and willpower to generate scares and tension. This will change eventually in the future where Ethan will be given more desperate situations
Mission: Impossible - Uprising
Movies · TheWriter117