Oh, thanks I'll work on it at once
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Hey. I rewrote the first chapter. Check it out and give me your thoughts. Hope it's better than the first version.
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Good beginning, good style, nice world building and I can't wait to see where this is going. Keep up the good work, author.
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Solid second chapter. Lets keep going.
ch 0 2 To Protect
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I loved it from the beginning. There was already tension right from the prologue. Let's hope it just gets better
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This book is totally worth it. I must say, I'm not even half way through but I'm hooked. I can't wait to continue. The only advise I have for guys out there, try it out right now.
EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
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