Webnovel Author: Zee_Afunso - Fanfic Collection

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Luke or William [img=thinking]

"You can call me Nina, miss," she introduced herself, and then explained about the job, "You will be working in Lord William's office as his secretary."

My Long Lost Mate

Fantasy · winterdaisy55

Zee_Afunso

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I have 2 issues hereOne is that jack is a boy's name why not use JackieTwo it is Grandma not GammaLoving the story so far

Jack, my Gamma, went out to accompany Maggie, the witch that has been living in my pack. She usually went out every six months to search for some herbs and items that she needed for her witchery. She has been helping my pack with some things in return for her safety.

My Long Lost Mate

Fantasy · winterdaisy55

Zee_Afunso

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It is seen not see okayJust helping you correct your writing speech since English is your second language [img=recommend][img=recommend]The story is very good [img=update][img=strong][img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=Loving it]

"Now that you see her, you should leave," said Sir Luke to the man, furrowing his brows together. I didn't know why he seemed to be very irritated by his presence.