Webnovel Author: misox - Novel Collection

I'm a newbie writer and I could really use your help. I'm not exactly a pro at this writing thing, so I'm reaching out to ask for some friendly feedback. If you spot any grammar blunders, wonky sentences, or anything else that needs fixing, I'd be super grateful to hear about it. I'm all ears for your tips and tricks to get better. Just so you know, I'm not here to rack up 5-star reviews*I'm^^* nah but fr would really appreciate your honest review.