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ch 23 Chapter 23: A spar between a student and teacher (3)
Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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You're correct. I should have used 'thought' instead of 'mutter,' as 'mutter' implies speaking in a barely audible tone. I mistakenly believed 'mutter' meant the same as thought or saying something in an inaudible tone馃拃馃拃. I've realized my error, and I'll begin editing the chapters tomorrow to replace 'mutter' with the appropriate word. I'll make these changes as soon as possible. My apologies for any inconvenience to all my readers. 馃檹
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Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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That would meters, it's a typo. I will fix it now.
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Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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Fixed.
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Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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After he becomes S rank Divinity then the next rank is SS rank Divinity and so on
They must reach the level of an E grade Divinity to pass. The Grades of Divinity range from E to SSSS grades.
Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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I apologize it should be a mistake. I will fix it.
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Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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I will start to change the tenses from Future to past tense from today and also improve the writing quality of the first few chapter as much as possible
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Primordial Monarch System
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I have started to improve the grammar a few days ago. I also have started to change the tenses to past tense from future tense.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1:The Successor of The Primordial Monarch System
Primordial Monarch System
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I will try to improve it.
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Primordial Monarch System
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I have fixed it. The cultivation realm was spiritual cultivation realm but I forgot to add spiritual before it.
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Primordial Monarch System
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I am new so I am still learning but I will improve everything I promise.Thank for commenting
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Primordial Monarch System
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I am still new here so I am still learning but I promise I will improve the entire novel including my writing quality and plot. I am very sorry for describing this. I shall start to edit everything from tomorrow Thanks for this suggestion though. No one ever criticized me in the comment so I didn't know where to improve.So I thank you for that.Also, I promise to improve my novel in the next three days. So please give my novel a second chance 馃檹
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Primordial Monarch System
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I would like to know why are you saying this is a horrible novel. So that I can correct and avoid making the same mistake again.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Battling with a group of cultivator(1)
Primordial Monarch System
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I was unaware the difference between a necromancer and a summoner. I thought necromancer meant the same as a summoner so I named his class as Divine Necromancer. I would have changed the title if it was possible but changing the title now is not possible. I will put down a warning as an Auxiliary chapter later today or tomorrow. Sorry for any inconvenience caused.
A Divine Necromancer is a class that will allow you to learn all of the skills of summoning Magic as your intelligence increases. There isn't any summoning Magic that you can't learn.
Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons
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