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Ajwoohin

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I'm bored so I write when I feel like it. Works: INFINITE SOURCE MAGE

2023-05-27 Joined Global

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you give a detailed review/comments especially I keep seeing ur comment on novels I read, so I have a shameful request if u could critique my novel be brutality honest

An alchemist was a profession that only had a small return on investment in the early stages. Do not look at how the later stages of the profession were filled with wealth that could rival a country. However, it was very normal for the early stages of the profession to be miserable.

I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

Eastern · Fu Xiao Chen

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try "ruffled " for more like tender or care or I have misunderstood .

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is it a typo? "am"? or "I'm"?

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perfectly described someone I know

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aight, thx for noticing.

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Infinite Source Mage

Infinite Source Mage

Fantasy · Ajwoohin

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I expected a plot twist that the duke was nc smh

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"The Duke has finally started to lose it. I was wondering how long it was going to take."

A Romance Story For Myself

A Romance Story For Myself

History · Moonlee_xx

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wt* bro what in the npc shi is he doing

"Try and ignore me again!" He slashed his whip across my arm. My skin sizzled at the hit and my sleeve was ripped.

A Romance Story For Myself

A Romance Story For Myself

History · Moonlee_xx

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I would grab it and ripped it

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At that time, my eyes were focused on every word that the king wrote onto that paper. He finished the letter, signed it, folded it neatly, and stamped it with the royal seal. He handed it off to the butler and that took my last shred of happiness away.

A Romance Story For Myself

A Romance Story For Myself

History · Moonlee_xx

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betrayal

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"Lily only wanted someone she could speak her heart to, and the Crown Prince was the only person she trusted fully. She felt her heart beat rapidly every time he was around, and butterflies whenever he would get close to her. Love, oh what a beautiful thing it is."

A Romance Story For Myself

A Romance Story For Myself

History · Moonlee_xx

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different hair/eye color = bully/gossip's make sense 🧠 🤓

The princess walked into the office only to find that it wasn't just the king who asked for her presence. Right next to the king stood her majesty, the Queen of the Kingdom of Hestia, Elizabeth Von Ferese Hestia. Following the queen stood the three lights of the kingdom. The Crown Princess, the First Prince and the Young Prince as well. All five family members shone brightly in the sunlight, with their dazzling golden hair and radiantly blue eyes. They stood with grace exuding the aura of royalty. On the other side of the room stood the second princess, with her dark brown hair and emerald green eyes, she looked like she wasn't a part of the family. With the astoundingly different appearance, rumours spread that the princess was actually an illegitimate child. The light to those rumours was never investigated.

A Romance Story For Myself

A Romance Story For Myself

History · Moonlee_xx

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what a typical servant thing to do

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As she walked down the hallways, the maids and servants formed little huddled with their hands covering each other's ears, the sound of mumbles and whispers filling the entire hallway. Yet the princess continued to walk elegantly paying no mind to the context of those whispers.

A Romance Story For Myself

A Romance Story For Myself

History · Moonlee_xx

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