CrhonoZer0

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Hai, guys. Aku penulis pemula, dan mulai merintis kisah novel untuk mengasah kemampuan.

2023-06-04 Joined Global
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CrhonoZer0
6 days ago
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This is just my opinion. I think the last few chapters felt monotonous because they focused on the foster girls. I wish there would have been more focus on Ulrich, or if it did focus on the foster girls, the story could have been told from Ulrich's perspective. Not first-person POV, but something like Ulrich listening to their accounts of their actions or observing them silently, or occasionally.

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CrhonoZer0
1 months ago
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[7: Three hundred miles to the west of Qiuye Territory, a group of Tiger-headed Men will be chasing a group of the Fox Girl Race...]

Fantasy Lord: Beginning with Daily Intelligence

Fantasy Lord: Beginning with Daily Intelligence

Eastern · If life were only like the first dream

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CrhonoZer0
1 months ago
Commented

wow

"You might as well not call it Tai Chu Scroll, you should rename it 'Legend: Starting from a Fertilized Egg'!"

Damn it! Let's smash the darkness together!

Damn it! Let's smash the darkness together!

Eastern · Roll it again tomorrow

CrhonoZer0
CrhonoZer0
1 months ago
Posted

I’ve read up to the last free chapter. The writing style is good. The plot is somewhat relaxed, but still good. As for the language style and grammar, I’m not really sure. The pacing is fairly fast—not slow, but not too fast either. The worldbuilding and power system are quite easy to understand, although the mechanics aren’t the main focus. The MC is fairly calm and intelligent. He prefers to play it safe, like a normal person (which I think is good), unlike typical MCs who tend to be a bit reckless. He has a decent sense of justice and morality. Overall, it’s interesting and good.

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CrhonoZer0
1 months ago
Commented

WW is not a boy, right? He is a grandfather!

CrhonoZer0
CrhonoZer0
2 months ago
Commented

Nice question. It's because...

"Isn't it stated in there that anyone who does not possess 'The Root of Desire' is eligible to practice this? All I have left are bones, so why am I still unable to practice this skill?"

Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich

Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich

Fantasy · Angry Squirrel