Webnovel Author: Laurian_Avrigeanu - Novel Collection

Shameless author review here. To give you a brief overview of the book, it follows the story of a boy who dies in our modern world and is reborn in a fantasy world of swords and magic. Lilly, one of the main characters, is a determined and strong-headed individual who seeks a more meaningful existence in the new world. Her attachment to this world takes on a deeper level after her reincarnation. In terms of power, the protagonist doesn't become overly dominant. At most, they reach a continental level of strength, ensuring that the power scaling remains within reasonable limits. Romance gradually unfolds in the story, but it's worth noting that it may not always have a happy ending. Tragedy is a possibility, adding emotional depth to the narrative. I aim to update the book regularly, with new chapters released either daily or once every two days, allowing readers to stay engaged with the story. Sometimes I go on a binge and release multiple chapters a day, which might feel a bit unfair as the readers can't handle the amount of detail I'm writing into the chapters, but hey, hold on there! :P Feel free to ask any questions about the book or request more details. Your interest and support are appreciated!

The writing of this novel is similar to a seasonal anime. Consider the first volume as being season 1, it is all intertwined and builds up to the last chapter. The lorebook serves as a wikipedia of sorts and extras are basically short OVA-s. Chapters are not planned as they go, they are planned before being written.

So, I've read the first 8 or so chapters. And I have to say one thing, excellent work. I can feel it, I can smell it, I can see it. My only nitpick is that you sometimes use words that have to be searched in a dictionary, other than that, congratulations, I know how hard it is to keep this type of writing up.

It definitely has potential, however, the author needs to work a lot on both his english, vocabulary, and building a more consistent type of writing. As it is right now, it's mostly bland dialogue with no emotion to back it up, it's all up to the viewer to guess what the characters are feeling when they are talking. I have noticed in his later chapters he's been getting a bit better, but there's still room for improvement.

Thank you for the kind review! There are some typos in the novel I'm trying to go over, if you could comment where you see a typo in the future, that would be great.

Thank you for your kind review!

Thank you for your kind review!