Oh well, at least I can only say thanks for staying to read my book. And I'm sorry if it's not to your liking. But I really just want to say that please stop assuming something that was written yet. Well, since maybe you maybe aren't going to read my comment, I'll say the thing from your assumption that is wrong for other people who read your comment. There are things that I want to sort out. The first one is your sentence about 'MC is gonna have a harem, but to have it be a harem full of backstabbing harlots?' Well, there is a harem tag on this book so there will be a harem obviously. But the thing is, did I already show who will be the MC harem? Or maybe you just assuming that the character that you called a backstabbing harlot is his harem? Like take example Elise, which part of the chapter implicates her will be joining Gil's harem. Like blud distrusts her to the core, even he got drugged cause he didn't listen to her warning. Again please tell me where I write who will be his harem cause I believe I haven't shown it yet. If anyone asked 'when?' It will soon. Now the second thing that hurt me a little was that you said 'It will be another novel where all the women will redeem themselves of their harlot lifestyle and fornicating with MC' Like is there anything wrong with a character redeeming themself from a 'character growth' standpoint, though? Like I feel that will make the character feel more alive right? Or maybe I'm wrong? However, what I said is purely from the character growth aspect, okay. It has nothing to do with the relationship with MC. And that's where, I think, you make assumptions again. Like bruh, why Gil would like to sleep with them? As it stated from the start he hates NTR passionately, and he won't stick his D with those girls, Elise included. He is a vengeful person dude. That's why he wanted to pay back those three girls from the game. 'But Elise wouldn't get the payback?' Like, this person and another comment already said, Elise is strong, more than Gil. He fights her now, he is dead. However, soon he will realize that Elise is into him, and that's where his payback comes in. Well, that's where my argument comes to an end. Thanks though for leaving a comment, I hope you will come to a story that into your liking. Have a nice day :)
ch 22 Bandits (5)
Fantasy · Bam007
Wah, nggak nyangka ada sama2 orang indonesia nyapa, makasih gan udah mampir :)
ch 0 1 Wake Up Inside the Shity Game
Fantasy · Bam007
Same
As in an intense gaze, Anderson moved his face closer to Elise. They leaned in, their eyes fluttering shut as their lips brushed against each other. Then he forced his tongue inside her and intertwined it in a passionate dance, exploring every nook and cranny with an urgency that mirrored his pent-up desires.
Fantasy · Bam007
Sorry for the late reply, thank you for the encouragement. I truly appreciate it, thank you :')
ch 17 Premium Weapon (4)
Fantasy · Bam007
Better than getting cucked in the future, sadly :(
Lack, unfortunately, did not survive the monster's sudden appearance. He had been in the exact spot where the creature landed, and the ground around the Troll's legs was now splattered in crimson, mingled with the scattered remains of their fallen comrade.
Fantasy · Bam007
Just a hyperbolic way to describe :D. It's called the Dragon of Calamity, officially :)
But to Gil, this dragon held a special significance beyond common knowledge. It was no ordinary dragon. This immense terror was the last boss of the game, the Ender Dragon—the harbinger of the world's end. Its name was Skadilok, the dragon of calamity.
Fantasy · Bam007
The scene is necessary. It was to convey to Gil the alternate future of the people he gets involved with, as he wasn't meant to exist in that world. If it is something you interpreted as humiliation to Lack then feel free to think so. But please mind that I make the world with NTR culture on it, where the good guy gets cucked. I wanted to show what his fate would be if he didn't meet with Gil. Hope that answers your question :)
ch 19 Bandits (2)
Fantasy · Bam007
I will try. Sorry for the late reply. It was a hectic week for me :(
ch 15 Premium Weapon (2)
Fantasy · Bam007
Thank you for the review and the five stars :)
The first one that MC bangs will be a hot one so don't worry :)
ch 0 7 Dungeon Raid (1)
Fantasy · Bam007
Yeah, but he thought that it would be an easy job. If he knew it would be hard, he wouldn't take it.
Still in anger, Anderson found himself discontented with Lack's actions and retorted, "Are you actually taking this worthless brat's side, Lack? This imbecile dragged us into this mess and nearly got us killed! And you're defending him?"
Fantasy · Bam007
It's close but not yet
ch 13 Boss Fight (2)
Fantasy · Bam007
Familiar???
'Holy shit, he is so cool.' Gil mused to himself, his admiration unmistakable.
Fantasy · Bam007
Only in this fight. After he gets the P2W gun, he will OP af.
Regardless of the cause, Gil was acutely aware that he had made a big mistake and was now paying the price. He couldn't shake off the guilt of dragging the others into his selfish quest. Maybe not Anderson and Elise, but Lack, in particular, shouldn't have been entangled in this hard situation.
Fantasy · Bam007
Dang, my bro seems to hate them with passion 🤣. Thank's for your input, but I'm not planning to show a torture in detail, I'm afraid. Cause I don't want add gore. Must keep the story family-friendly 😉.
The f*cked up thing was after the narration of Sid's suicide, there would be a scene where the girls were having an orgy party with multiple men. This made Gilbert's veins pop out on all of his skin. And that was why he kept banging his table out of anger. The Hero route was the wholesomeness that happened as it showed how Sid became the Hero loved by everyone. But the NTR really ruined it.
Fantasy · Bam007
It's NTR game unfortunately 🤣. It's the MC fate to become cucked and depressed. Blame the developer for that 🤣
The f*cked up thing was after the narration of Sid's suicide, there would be a scene where the girls were having an orgy party with multiple men. This made Gilbert's veins pop out on all of his skin. And that was why he kept banging his table out of anger. The Hero route was the wholesomeness that happened as it showed how Sid became the Hero loved by everyone. But the NTR really ruined it.
Fantasy · Bam007
What??? He was just jealous that Lack got praised more by Elise. Which part that implicate he is gay?
"Lack did a good job protecting you, yeah? And yet you never praised me even though I did the same." Anderson's words dripped with intensity, mirroring the unrelenting gaze he held.
Fantasy · Bam007
En cuanto a esto, todavía tenía que dar prioridad a la pistola en primer lugar, ya que era débil. Hacer un problema ahora pondría en peligro la búsqueda. Y si le echaban la culpa, quién sabe lo que le pasaría. Pero dejar el asunto así como así y liberar al cornudo seguramente dejaría un mal sabor, así que esperen más capítulos para saber qué pasará :) De nuevo, lo siento es una traducción de DeepL
ch 10 Dungeon Raid (4)
Fantasy · Bam007
Well, he is an idiot sometimes. But please remember he was too preoccupied with the hero thingy and ended up ignoring other things. He has something like 'tunnel vision' on his mind, I think.
ch 22 Bandits (5)
I Got Transported as Extra in an NTR Eroge Game
Fantasy · Bam007