trolling Author lol
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Eastern · HambinoRanx
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Eastern · HambinoRanx
neat fighting system. i hope to see it be used since you spent a lot words on developing it.
It's important to focus on the right fighting style. I will take more time reviewing and learning these methods and find what suits earth magic the best.
Fantasy · HambinoRanx
another great chapter read. keep it up
Gazing up towards the sun, the bearded man covered in blood and cut marks hovers the blade over my chest, ready to pierce.
Fantasy · HambinoRanx
good descriptions
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Fantasy · HambinoRanx
vibes
By the looks of it, my mother is a dark redhead with a slender build, while Pops has dark brown hair. He's definitely on the bulky side.
Fantasy · HambinoRanx
love the descriptions here
Slowly, everything fades to black, and I feel myself falling into a black lake, a red ribbon hanging on to me. As the water pulls me deeper, everything turns pitch black. When I try to gasp for air, I'm suddenly on the blackened ground, surrounded by golden lights.
Fantasy · HambinoRanx
really good chapter, keep it up
ch 0 8 Chapter 1 - Finale
Fantasy · HambinoRanx
really good chapter i have a lo to catch up though! 46 chapters already
ch 0 7 Chapter 1 - Part 6
Fantasy · HambinoRanx
the first 30 chapters felt really good but after wards the plot seems to have slowed down and characters aren’t being described well after events. the world background needs a lot more details. i will give another chance at 100 chapters