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the first 30 chapters felt really good but after wards the plot seems to have slowed down and characters aren’t being described well after events. the world background needs a lot more details. i will give another chance at 100 chapters

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trolling Author lol

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neat fighting system. i hope to see it be used since you spent a lot words on developing it.

It's important to focus on the right fighting style. I will take more time reviewing and learning these methods and find what suits earth magic the best.

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Fantasy · HambinoRanx

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another great chapter read. keep it up

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Gazing up towards the sun, the bearded man covered in blood and cut marks hovers the blade over my chest, ready to pierce.

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Fantasy · HambinoRanx

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good descriptions

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vibes

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By the looks of it, my mother is a dark redhead with a slender build, while Pops has dark brown hair. He's definitely on the bulky side.

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Fantasy · HambinoRanx

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love the descriptions here

Slowly, everything fades to black, and I feel myself falling into a black lake, a red ribbon hanging on to me. As the water pulls me deeper, everything turns pitch black. When I try to gasp for air, I'm suddenly on the blackened ground, surrounded by golden lights.

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

Fantasy · HambinoRanx

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