I am just a newbie writer in age 19 from Bangladesh. I want you to help me identify my mistakes. I will do my best to write a time worthy story for you. Wish me best of luck!
2023-06-22 Joined Bangladesh
Thanks. I will try to change the description.
Thank you. Wish me best of luck.
Loved it. I remember this book cover. Well best of luck! Keep writing. Writing quality is good....and the story has a promising future. I want to see how it goes.
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first person pov...same as mine...best chapter
ch 0 1 Transmigrator
Fantasy · Kristoph_X
medium mana pill for free. free things always look good
-Mana pill formula x1 (Medium grade)
Fantasy · Kristoph_X
yes here comes the skill
Skill Acquired: Swordbirth
Fantasy · Kristoph_X
I liked the start
A strong gust of wind rushed around me, I tried to open my eyes daringly but my body seemed to disobey me, My eyes were shut closed.No matter how much I sent signals to my body to move, It wouldn't respond. It was almost as if our connection was severed, with everywhere else not responding except for my mouth.
Fantasy · Kristoph_X
I liked the story. And how you literally added an emoji to show the smirk, I was laughing hard. Unique one. Loved how you described the vam girl. Best of luck
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Thanks a lot sir. It really means a lot
Just watch and read...there is a reason behind the name...let me not give you any spoiler :3
ch 0 2 Freezing Event
Fantasy · Reshoph
hey I tried to improve. How does it look now?
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Fantasy · Reshoph
Quite interesting. There were some silly mistakes but don't worry, you will overcome them gradually. Reread your writings again and again to find the mistakes. Don't stop writing and I am eager to see how your story unfolds. Best of luck!