Webnovel Author: DaoistthV4aQ - Novel Collection

Amazing! In the first chapter i had the Mafia romance vibes, but as the story paced it also put Emotions like Sadness and pity for Characters. Keep it up, and there are a few mistakes in Punctuation and Dialogues. You can fix them just by giving them a re-read

The story is developing really nicely since it's the start but Readers can tell that the story is pacing really nicely. (Loved the bit of humour you added.) I really liked it keep it up.

I honestly found the Characters kinda Cute, Beside that the novel is really capable of keeping a reader on track, It is one of the amazing novels i have read nowadays. Keep it up <3

I am so sorry for misconvenience, Can you point a Something out as an example so i can improve, Please it will help me alot

Amazing story, It is such interesting yet confusing story, Haven't read such one in the genre of vampires, I enjoyed it so much, keep it up.

The book is really gripping and the way the emotions (especially Pain) are explained is truely amazing and fascinating. Keep it up and Waiting for the update <3

The story is keeping the grip even tho It's just started and the characters development is amazing, I really loved the writing style as well.

SUPER AMAZING! Not really a fan of the supernatural but the way author got me hooked on this story is so so amazing. +It's rare to see books with such strong female leads

I can't get over this story honestly, and the writing style is so catchy and Shocking, as a person who is not into this category even I am getting so interest.