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useless exposition
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: This is just a dream!
Devouring the Apocalypse
Urban · GreaterLord26
stupid skill
Looking at the list of five skills, Ling Yi only hesitated for a moment before choosing [Starfall].
God's Path: I Can Create A Lot Of Cheats Through Mutation
Sci-fi · Million Phantom God
Why not just save up Evolution points and increase other stuff without evolving?
ch 0 6 Chapter 6 Explosive News_1
Global Catastrophe: I Became the World Tree
Sci-fi · Crystal head
"Master! You did so well on your first try! You should train more!" Louise's adorable baby face cleansed all the system messages.
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
With her by his side, Leon realized just how short she was. While he towered at 190cm, Louise was 155cm at most, and that gap was pretty noticeable. She was much cuter, though!
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
??
Leon gazed at her for a while, wiped off some of them, then looked away and stared at the cloudless sky, "Yes, it is."
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
unnatural and clunky
Leon smiled faintly at her, and as she looked deeply into his eyes, he replied, "Life is what you make it. I'd be honored to help you make it merrier. See, I hate being alone. And I just appeared in this world, so I'll take the lead and invite you to my party. Louise, would you like to adventure with me?"
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
HP is a stupid concept outside of a game.
[Leon Blade Lv. 1(0/50) HP: 1000/1000 MP: 1000/1000]
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
unnecessary exposition
Then the orders from above fell upon him, and he whispered... "Not only I can't tell him that the peak humanity's body attracts and accepts the opposite gender of the same quality, but you also want me to personally oversee his test and increase the level. Is he the new kind I'll grow to hate?"
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
A bit much. Rather than this he should be angry at the cloak man.
Leon hadn't interrupted the black spirit, but he stood with boiling heart: his hands were clenched, his face was scrunched deeply, and he was trembling. Tears streaked down from his left eye while his right remained on the black spirit's hood, seemingly ready to answer him at any moment.
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
Cringe. Have mature women act like mature women, not blushing schoolgirls. It's annoying.
Miss Kim suddenly realized she had been standing silently for too long and she quickly tried to get her composure back. She was acting like a school girl with a silly crush!
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
The more I think about your plot the less sense it makes. How did REACH turn their drinks into the zombie virus and why? Why does destroying them mean that the drink never gets distributed, can they not find another advertiser?
ch 15 Departure Time
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
A printed out contract?
Han growled in anger before he got a brilliant idea. He smiled as he went to work. Once he was finished with that, he finally found the contract that Miss Kim was to sign with REACH and worked on that as well.
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
Okay, this is awful. It's fine that she's dead, but like this? Abysmal writing.
But all of his resolve was for nothing. Because the next morning, Miss Kim died. What a cruel joke this was!! Han cried for a long time after he found her cold body. It had been so long since he cried. Not since he had to bury his parents twice over, but now he cried because of someone he hated.
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
clunky
"If you could say one thing to your past self, what would it be?" Miss Kim asked this with teary eyes.
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
stupid
Han said this while walking away from Miss Kim and out of the building. He saw Miss Kim was about to begin crying, but just like the street girl she was she cleaned it and followed behind him. He couldn't help that he was proud of her! This woman was strong!
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
character development should be slower.
But Han wasn't going to just let her get what she wanted. He wasn't the same person he was before that just allowed anyone walk over him. Gaining power and intelligence always changes a man. And for Han, it gave him courage unlike never before!
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
really? that's the best surname you could think of?
Name: Alex Vorax
Devouring the Apocalypse
Urban · GreaterLord26