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Genesis13

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replace 'majestic', consider 'sinister' or 'grave'

"Have you forgotten who owns the house?" Kayla said as her appearance became majestic.

Taming the billionaire werewolf

Taming the billionaire werewolf

Fantasy · Prince_charming57

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Commented

consider a better phrasing. the metaphor doesn't suit the mood. and there's some grammatical error too. like ' her current expresssion was nothing like what it used to be. instead of her cheerful demeanor, she was crying like a madwoman (metaphor)'

"Yes sire" Peter said looking at the crying Kayla with a pitiful expression. Her current expression is inappropriate and nothing like the past Kayla who is filled with good vibes and positive energy. Now she looks like a mad woman whose child was stolen from her.

Taming the billionaire werewolf

Taming the billionaire werewolf

Fantasy · Prince_charming57

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Commented

wow! starting with a bang!!

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Replied to Lao_Stev

might be chatgpt. who knows? but the language is kinda same as that. I know it cuz i used to use it

Suddenly, a thought struck her, and she exclaimed, "Oh! I almost forgot the kids might still be sleeping. Should I wake them?" she muttered aloud.

Hitman x Family

Hitman x Family

Anime & Comics · Livice

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Replied to Ender_Peach

right abt that

And with her family by her side, on her death bed and as she was tearing up she said nothing more nor less than just "Don't forget me."

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Fantasy · Ender_Peach

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Commented

a Lil typo here....

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somehow i feel like saying, "please forget me". if i were her that is

And with her family by her side, on her death bed and as she was tearing up she said nothing more nor less than just "Don't forget me."

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Fantasy · Ender_Peach

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I want to eat your pancreas

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But as she went in for a normal health check at the hospital since she was experiencing abdominal pain and unnatural weight loss, she left the room with a diagnosis of pancreatic cancer.

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Fantasy · Ender_Peach

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Commented

it's really odd to find a college student with a healthy lifestyle

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A woman in her early twenties, with long braided blond hair and green eyes, a college student with a healthy lifestyle, parents she could look up to and a little brother she could take care of, this is who Jinny was.

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Fantasy · Ender_Peach

Genesis13
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ah lol, 🤣 the demonic peach

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I am getting sus vibes here

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"Speaking of which why did you even know how a gun works? If my scan was correct you haven't used one in your life." Peach questioned.

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Fantasy · Ender_Peach

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poor girl, didn't have the odds to stay a bit longer with her guy :(

"Well, not really. When you were running from the goblin I did a rough scan of your brain. Remember when I said "Done"? That's when I finished the brain scan. Pretty sad life story by the way." Peach explained.

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Manipulating Odds in an Apocalyptic World

Fantasy · Ender_Peach

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