I apologize for the error, it should be fixed now. Thanks for the tip :)
ch 17 Fenrya
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I would like to add one more recommendation, there has been a small change, is Sanryu's age has increased to eighteen, instead of sixteen. Almost nothing changes to the plot, but if you still find sixteen years written, warn me that I will change her immediately.
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I would like to add one more recommendation, there has been a small change, is Sanryu's age has increased to eighteen, instead of sixteen. Almost nothing changes to the plot, but if you still find sixteen years written, warn me that I will change her immediately.
"Good job guys, rest now, we'll continue after lunch." Kiyotaka speaks to the two boys, who were practicing friendly fencing.
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I would like to add one more recommendation, there has been a small change, is Sanryu's age has increased to eighteen, instead of sixteen. Almost nothing changes to the plot, but if you still find sixteen years written, warn me that I will change her immediately.
ch 0 2 Yasaze's decision
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I would like to add one more recommendation, there has been a small change, is Sanryu's age has increased to eighteen, instead of sixteen. Almost nothing changes to the plot, but if you still find sixteen years written, warn me that I will change her immediately.
ch 0 6 The prince's party
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Yes, guys in general, I don't think it was necessary to specify it, after all we know the genders of the two.
"Good job guys, rest now, we'll continue after lunch." Kiyotaka speaks to the two boys, who were practicing friendly fencing.
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Thanks for the report, in fact the name of the protagonist was not clear. Now I should have fixed it, if you see other similar serious errors, please report it to us. :)
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Thank you very much for your comment.
ch 0 2 Yasaze's decision
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Thanks for letting me know, it was a mistake, I've fixed it now. :)
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I'm sorry if it bothers anyone, but this is the MC of my novel. I don't want to be the usual young protagonist, handsome and with perfect muscles... there are hundreds of them out there in the other novels. If you really can't stand it, I'm sorry, but it's not the novel for you, but if you turn a blind eye and try to appreciate it, you'll see what you'll like. :)
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No, he has now become an old man, even if many years will pass before he dies, he will remain that way. Unfortunately he became strong too late, so the Aether was only able to stop his aging when he reached his peak of power. And then I wanted to change from the typical charming male protagonist, from a young age.
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I really appreciate readers like you who understand what I'm writing and are following the plot, thank you very much indeed. ♥
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No, that genre doesn't appeal to me much
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I'm sorry but I don't think I will. I've tried in the past to write novels in English...but I gave up, as readers always commented that my English grammar was bad, even though I was trying hard to improve. So I think it's better that I write only Italian novels, and the internet translator will translate the novel into your language. So far I haven't received any comments regarding the grammar, I assume that my readers are able to follow the plot correctly, and I can understand that the translator is also not optimal, but at least you can keep up with my story.
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Hi, not right now, but I might think about it in the future. As you said it's not easy...
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hi :), neither.
ch 0 1 Golden lit night sky
The son of heaven
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